Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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A few lil typos sneaking into this one -
"antique coo-coo clock" - cuckoo
"dawn her armor" - don
"learning your roll" - role
"for elegant diarch" - for the elegant diarch
Other than that, fun little chapter with some nice banter. :)
For some reason I think of a coo-coo clock as having a pair of animated Minotaur figures hammering away on a gong.
When the masses are messing in the mess, theres bound to be a mass of messing with mess of massing round the showers.
Well, at least Griffinf dont like Thomas because something delightlyfull to sight.
Look ma, Worms.
Oh Dear.
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Add to that "Sunday's" - Sundays
"patter her back" - patted
I like it
This chapter was interesting. It's nice to see more about Moonlight's routine and POV, especially since we meet her fellow friends and see how shy/awkward she can be. I enjoyed how the conversation subjects changed so quickly like how one mare talks about how her' dad liked being mounted by his wives or how another mare got rid of a tense atmosphere by asking what Thomas' Rick looks like. Anyway, thanks for the chapter.
Short but sweet. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
6893245 Thank you. That "don" part is a little annoying since the mistake was all the way back in the prologue and no one's caught it till now. Gonna take a bit of work to go back and fix it all. Oh well. Thanks again.
6893472 Appreciated.
6893609 Stream of consciousness can be fun sometimes.
that was a awesome read ,it was awesome getting to meet Moonlights other friends and funny too you can see how close they are.And a little more of there history.IT be funny as soon as she gets to there chambers she see's him in the buff.
6894147 Thank you, but there's no way it'd be that easy.
When you hate someone so much that....
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6894217 It is a pretty severe insult, isn't it.
Wow, I didn't imagine mortal poneh sex would be so vanilla... and awkward.
In most Furry porn stories, the anthro build makes "face to face"(missionary, dolphin, etc) and "cowgirl" more convenient than "feral" (doggie) style, so the ponehs must be running on instinct a lot for this.
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I have to wonder if nipping is a big factor in sex for them since that is a big part of RL horse sexxins, and can pretty much only be done to the back and base of the neck from behind...
6894622 That's the general idea going on here.
Also, I've read about the nips, but I didn't know that particular detail. This will be amended in later chapters. Thank you.
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It's such a common part of breeding, part of the equipment for a professional stud farm is a leather or quilted protector covering the upper shoulder and neck for when the stallion gets too "enthusiastic", but I would like to think sapient ponies wont overdo it like that. Would they spice it up by substituting finger pinches now and then? (In gentle nipping motions)
So far as I have seen IRL, The bites do encourage the mare to submit and stay in place, and some look quite... "Pleased"... by it.
Since it's never come up before, would it be reasonable that it's not something Luna would have broached with Thomas unless he discovers her guilty pleasure by accident, or his lovebites from the front have been a good substitute?
6894767 Difficult to say. I suppose I'll allude to a thing he's been doing that's made up for a general lack of biting. I suppose this is going to be a thing Talon'll have to change.
A chapter on Moonlight is a good chapter !
liked the update and i find your logic in the authors note to make sense as well
6895676 So it would seem.
6896488 Awesome
6896830 Just wait and see.
What does Thomas spending two hours between Luna's buttcheeks have to do with whatever this Dolphin-style is? Why are they so curious about Thomas' package? Why would Moonlight agree to ask about it?
6897199 Dolphin style is belly to belly, also known as missionary and an uncommon method of sex in this world.
Because they have never seen it before and he's a foreign creature they know so little about.
Because she's just as curious and, though she accepts his sense of modesty, doesn't fully understand his nudity taboo.
what gonna happen next chapter?
6907818 I suspect it will involve horse people being naked, but don't quote me on that.
6912746 I don't know how far you've gotten, but I confess that these first few chapters are terribly clunky. I hadn't expected the story to go this far, otherwise I would have planned out more and given a stronger presentation from the get go. For instance, I would have probably had Thomas and Moonlight already acquainted. However, most of these problems are already too far ingrained in the story that I just have to roll with them. That said, it really does get better the further along you go.
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Huh, and I really thought she was speaking metaphorically.
*Blueblood opens door* "Hmm, don't mind if I do!"
No capital on inquired.
Yep, they're in the military alright.
I'd gotten curious along the way, do your stallions HAVE sheaths? You keep implying that its all hanging out but that couldn't be right, could it?
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I can confirm the existence of sheaths. I think I was still a little iffy on that this early in writing so there might be a little inconsistency, but ultimately did settle on sheaths being a thing.
You know it's funny... the previous 48 chapters the stallions were described as not having sheathes. I know this because it has been bugging the fuck out of me since it was first mentioned... along with Spike the reptile actually having one... despite the fact that reptiles store their junk in genital slits. Which makes Discord the only local male without deformed tallywacker.
I'm even trying to read this again with lowered expectations and it's still bugging the crap out of me.
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I apologize for the inconsistency.
Can we get an excuse to get some “enhancements”? Idk he hangs out with zecora a day and accidentally knocks back a potion or 2?
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The term would be cloaca. Though here's an interesting question, would griffons and hippogriffs have cloacas? They both mammalian and avian features.
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The fact the topnhalf is bird and the bottwm half isn't I'd guess no.
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Oh shit I have read this before..... huh I had forgotten about it