Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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I am SO going to rereading all The Nightmare Before Christmas, it's hilarious.
The Princess Of Shipping has spoketh!
This chapter was wonderful. I really liked how the mares reacted when Thomas mentioned that the ride is tame compared to other horror/terror rides and when Thomas noticed the similarities between holidays. Likewise, I liked the interaction between Grace and the group and Cadance was a riot due to her attempted candy theft and keeping Shining running around . I got to say that I loved the dynamic between Cadance and Moonlight as she was capable of making her acknowledge her jealousy for Silver while admitting that she has feelings for Thomas. A part of me is also curious as to what Luna has planned to finish the masquerade and why did she and Celestia did that teasing (licked cheek from Celestia and the tail spank from Luna)? It was also sweet that Luna became popular with the foals while Silver and Grace bonded over being fan girls of Luna. Thanks for the amazing chapter.
Lunas all Candy, Mime, Mime, until she snorts it then shes all, Foal Free Press Meat. Cue the Yakkity Sax, till hunger for laughter is assuaged.
If the standard Guard is having reactions in the foals Haunted House, what if Thomas suggested building The Trauma Centre? A Hammer House Of Horrors for training Special Guard Service?
This is a ball, something always goes wrong at the ball.
Fantastic chapter, it's great to see Moonlight making progress with her feelings, I've been waiting for her to do so for a long long time. I look forward to further progress.
7280410 Good to hear.
7280441 Happy to serve.
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finally it took Cadence throwing things in Moonlight face for her to see the tree for the forest.
Well, Moonlight has finally noticed her feelings for Thomas. Now how much longer for Thomas to do likewise?
And it would seem that Cadance won't be as much help with him if she can't accurately decipher his 'bonds'.
I wonder how the horses would react to The Ring.
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i absolutely love the moments when Thomas drops a "that's no big deal for humans" bomb XD.
great chapter
Should have made go though a reenactment of the first Dead Space trailer or better yet areas of the Ishmura
I seriously hope Thomas forms a herd with Silver and Moonlight. Now that those two have gotten past their hostility, the three of them have good chemistry.
As much as I'm not in the 'humans are superior' camp, it is nice to see when what we do have over ponies is mentioned and written into the flow well. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
7280686 next few chapters please
In this town, we call home, everyone hails to the pumpkin song!
That's in my head now you bastard.
I loved this chapter and I'm Moonlight and Siver are getting along know.And the part eith Luna as Nightmare moon had me LOTF. this just gets better and better ,Ihope Silver, Moonlight and Thomas make a herd soon and maybe add Grace too.
7285993 Now you know my pain.
The hopeless romantic in me wants a slow dance scene between Thomas and either Luna or Moonlight at some point.
7291328 Would have been nice, but that's not really the sort of thing for a Halloween-ish party.
7294572 No but Maybe for a Hearts and Hooves day thing.
Is this where Twilight gets the idea for her costume?
So... Cadance is Equestria's version of eHarmony and Match.com? Only more effective and accurate?
: A LITTLE?!
I really liked the chapter by the way.
7295465 Princess of love. It's what she do.
So, Moonlight is finally gonna put on the Big-Mare panties, huh?
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Always fun to see someone else enjoying the same stories from different authors. And this time it wasn't even your standard comment!
Joking, joking. Honestly, I think it's cool this chapter was unique enough to get a different response from you.
Also, hi!
7283698 Mucho thanko.
You know, I think that Princess Cadence is kinda hitting the vibe for a bunch of us in wanting to hit Moonlight with a clue-stick. But I think Aeris from VG Cats can summon up both Princess Cadence's feelings as well as my own.
Hey Aeris! Are you enjoying the budding relationship between Thomas and Moonlight Shield?
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0ByJp6aR4gRoXLTlJc2NDMHJlb0k/view?usp=sharing
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0ByJp6aR4gRoXR3FmRXZTdHVQMWs/view?usp=sharing
(Source is: http://www.vgcats.com/comics/?strip_id=72)
By Devil you mean Donald Trump o-o
Forget the Movies, those are the real Equestria games
7635914 Indeed. Perhaps we should open betting.
Comma
From the foals, or the adults?
8120376 Pick one.
Here's a few lines that may have frightened kids:
8132009 Ah. That's some good ol' family friendly nightmare fuel.
Oh hell yeah! Time for Moonlight to get a confidence boost.
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I still have been too lazy to do actual editing, but I did catch one.
Yen Sid (which, when combined, spells Disney backwards)
I only noticed it because the backwards made more intuitive sense. Oh, and I also Google'd it.
Homie was down horrendous