Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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An update!!! Yawn.. I"ll just read it later..... *Curls up on the spot....* Zzzz
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
Yay! Another outstanding chapter!
I wonder how much Thomas' foresight could affect the big events that are going to pop up, like the wedding of Shining Armor and Cadance, or the return of the Crystal Empire...
Not to mention Tirek and Twilight's ascension
Special theory of Multiworlds is bad enough, all those parralel realities.
General theory is what allows you to access them far more easily, when you realise they re not actually parralel.
Yaay, no toothbrush latrine duty. Wasnt that Bluebloods job?
Eventually we are going to have a more coherent viewing order listed for the episodes?
The Changelings, as has been pointed out elsewhere, because they feed on emotions, are already in Canterlot to at least a given extent, but they shouldnt know as yet that the Princesses know about them, therefore an illusion disruption spell, though basic by shock and suprise value would be possible, it would trigger a whole load of unwanted changes, but you need to find a Changeling to be able to come up with a sense spell to find a Changeling? Maybe like Predator moving, then stationary, only an Alicorn can pick up the highly stable illusion or semi permanent form shift involved. True Sight maybe?
Celestias got more poker face than Lady Rara.
Celestia, Big Mac, Maud, playing poker. We need a fourth.
The chapter was great and I feel curious as to what happened between Moonlight's dad and Celestia that made him ask his daughter not to refer to her as auntie anymore. I hope that Thomas won't fall into a depression as it seems that the Princesses will constantly remind Thomas that he's a great guy, especially Luna who's happy that his born with Moonlight progressed. Thanks for the chapter.
Either "a difference" or "any differences".
Happy Luna is happy, I see she's all for "Moony"'s lateral move from guard to consort. Maybe she's got a hunger for some orange unicorn herself, though we already know she likes to watch... .
I'm curious as to which episodes have happened now. Looks like "Griffon the Brush-Off" happened, as did "Swarm of the Century", and we just had "Boast Busters". The first two are given because Luna but what else has and hasn't happened and what won't happen?
Sadly all that is second to the main story so it's unlikely to ever come up expect for casual mention like what was done with the parasprites. But that's fine, that's not what I want the story to focus on.
I want to see more of Thomas and how he deals with his transition. Also want to Talon and Moonlight get it on but, eigh, that goes without saying... .
I love this fic. I have many unread chapters of many fics in my fav list, but every time a new chapter of your story comes out I go straight to it.
I can't wait to see how this break in the universe affects the Royal Wedding. Will they be caught off guard more than they originally were? Or will they be even more vigilant against Queen Chrysalis?
that was a awesome read It was awesome how he stoud up for Moolight .And Moonlight was honerable in no holding back in her report and takeing her ponishments chen up and reddy for what ever it mite be.And I hope Thomus tells Luna about the kiss so we can find out was it relly about and what that spark was about ,I hope it was Twilight joining there herd.
i wonder if they know thomas kiss twilight?
6661012 Thomas won't be spending too much time in Ponyville so there won't be much of a need for specific episode order. Just the big events.
6661157 Welcome
6661163 Thanks for the catch.
Yeah. Your analysis of my use of episodes is pretty spot on.
It is indeed a given.
6661354 Awesome.
6661416 Same here. I've got some base ideas, but overall it's a mystery to me too.
6661928 Happy you liked it. However, at this time there are no plans of involving the mane six in any sexcepades.
6662009 They stated that he brought Twilight back to her senses. It was in the report.
Each time I read a new chapter of your fiction, I am relieved and frustrated at the same time... Why are you so cruel with me ?... T.T
You give developpement drop by drop and never at the same thing ! But I want mooooore !
Don't you dare "George R. R. Martin" me ! Oo
6666543 While I do appreciate the comparison, even I'm not that cruel.
6667836 Thanks, kind lord.
Broken sentence here.
6672117 Thanks for the catch
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I'm too is curious to see how this will affect others big events like the Canterlot Wedding, the return of the Crystal Empire and Sombra, Tirek escaping Tartarus and Etc.
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Is the MLP:FIM comic series will be canon in your story? Like Dragon Town existing in Canterlot, the Deer kingdom and backstory of the MLP villains from the comics. And be afraid to mix things up by throwing something new like introducing some G1 villains like Grogar or creating a original villain like a deer villain or something.
6672669 Yet to be determined. But if I do include comics, it'll only be the good ones.
Really liking the story so far. However I am a bit flummoxed by the lack of mention in this chapter about the other dimensional happening Pinkie alluded to. That seems more upsetting than the difference in time lines due to his appearance.
7166990 That's actually a bit of a plug to one of my other stories, one I keep meaning to continue but keep suffering from terminal writer's block http://www.fimfiction.net/story/300388/stranded-beyond-the-equestrian-veil And in case it wasn't clear, Pinkie was initially unable to tell the difference between Thomas and the protagonist of this story.
Thomas has been Twilight Sparkle zapped
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7900688 I'm afraid you're mistaken. It'd be more accurate to say that he was the one doing the zapping.
7924480 I was thinking of the wrists bit.
Ok, looks like "episodes out of order" isn't relevant anymore. Thank God for that.
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haha moonlight got a counseling chit and EMI, sucks to suck
Why do I have a feeling that Moonlight is going to get a copy of this letter from Luna...
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<chuckles> Well on to the next installment...
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Thanks. I needed that.