Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Nice chapter.
Thanks for the chapter and O agree with Talon. Thomas needs to grow a spine and overcome his insecurities. God knows that when Luna gets a new harem member, he'd have to be the bigger man and acknowledge that his relationship with Luna isn't exclusive. Also, Moonlight sniffing the guy in the shower made me laugh. Hope to see Blueblood get what's coming to him.
This was a good chapter, especially Luna getting angry about blueblood. I look forward to see the outcome to this. The only downside I see with this chapter was the missed godfather reference. I mean talon could have made him an offer he couldn't refuse. Other than that I look forward to the next chapter.
So is Thomas finally gonna stop being a whiney little bitch?
Is the moment I have been waiting for? IS this whiny little bitch finally grow a pair of balls and a spine and finally learn to stand up for himself? Huzzah! At last! Its going to happen!
hmmm i like it
stayclassy
Clinical chronic depression is one hell of a condition. Those without it can never really understand what it's like and those with it can never fully explain it.
Talon might not know Thomas is a depressive but she's going about her help the right way. I just keep waiting for her to finally admit she wants to have sex with him, Moonlight as well. I can see the later making a lateral move from harem guard to harem member.
Looks like Blueblood is about to get a lesson that he may be a Prince the Princesses are still of higher station than him.
Luna needs to drop the moon on him, err, the book. Yeah, the book... .
People complaining about Thomas beeing a weak bitch
Not all characters need to be sargent badass garystu, most of the time in this site (like 99.999% of the time) the human characters are specially good at something or superior to the ponies in many ways.
For me it is a good thing to finally read a story that breaks with this steriotype.
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Punch them in the crotch Thomas, you can do it
That will be funny to read.
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Now we just need to replace Goro's face with Blue Blood's >:3
6413707 I'm here to please.
6413726 We'll just have to see.
6413759 Never saw that movie, so couldn't even if I wanted to. Glad you enjoyed it.
6413824 And then Talon does something unpleasant to the person being insensitive to her friend's depression.
6413968 Was I really that subtle in giving Thomas depression? Because that's not the sort of thing you just get over.
6413981 I'll try.
6413983 Not a bad idea. I'll have to keep that in mind.
6414081 Finally, someone gets it. I've actually heard some pretty good explanations in the past. You feel bad over the littlest thing, and then you feel bad for feeling bad, and then it just keeps spiraling from there. Some days you can be perfectly mellow, but the slightest bit of misfortune can cause a chain reaction.
Glad you agree with Talon's methods. Also, she lifted her tail for him. It might have been a half joking gesture, but that also makes it half serious. As for Moonlight... I think I'm gonna draw out that torture.
6414135 The hero's journey wouldn't be nearly as compelling if he started out in god-mode. He's gotta work his way up from the bottom.
6414171 ... Maybe.
6414550 Well it was a bit subtle but god damn, every time something happens he is like a wilting flower, afraid to stand up for himself and others. Is it bad that I am actually waiting for the moment where Blueblood pretty much says 'Fuck it' and kidnaps (foalnaps if that is the pony version of the word) him to try and have his way with him and Thomas actually grows that spine and wrecks his ass or at the very least give him a pair of 'Blueballs' delivered by a swift kick?
6414589 It's a bit different from case to case, but overall that's how depression works. The slightest little thing going wrong can set off a downward spiral of negative feelings.
It is pretty bad, actually, but it might happen. Honestly still on the fence for that one.
6414576 I swear, some times I had to stop reading some fics because at the beginning the main human character was a regular joe, a normal person with flaws and feeling, physically inferior to the ponies (just physically), it was ok, but in later chapters the guy became some kind of elite soldier that can beat 20 enemies on his own, without any help, after a couple of months of training.
Personally, that only made the whole story boring and unrealistic.
6414615 Thomas will get stronger, but never that powerful. I'm still debating internally, but by the end of it all, he shouldn't be significantly more powerful than a skilled unicorn like Moonlight.
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I get it because I live it. I'm a diagnosed manic-depressive; excuse me, I have bipolar disorder (I had an older psychiatrists that used the former term so it is what I use myself).
My condition has been under control for years and years now but "under control" is not the same as "fixed" and I still have various bouts of mania and depression. Everyone learns ways to deal with it, be it music or movies or games or books or friends. When you're in that deep dark pit you need something to hold onto to pull yourself out and, all forbid, not dig yourself deeper.
Maybe Talon and Moonlight and Luna will be what Thomas needs to manage, because you can never "get over" it or "be rid of it", only ever manage, which is why I want to punch people in the throat when they say "Just get over it" or the like.
Anyways, the group seem to be helping Thomas, and the most important thing is to not give up hope.
I'd say he needed to get laid but, uh, well, that's happening. Often. Maybe he needs it a little less? I think maybe the over-saturation of dopamine is causing his depression to kick in a bit more often than normal. I'm kinda surprised his 'equipment' hasn't fallen off yet from overuse to tell the truth... .
6414756 Fascinating.
Hopefully not to spoil, but a lot of his insecurity comes from the belief that, as a prostitute, he's merely receiving temporary favoritism. Luna actually hasn't confessed that she loves him while he's conscious, under the belief that it's so obvious it doesn't need to be said. Thankfully, those around them will eventually pick up on this and get them to set things straight.
Im happy he is finlly going to learn to defined himsalf.
6415015 Your sentiment is apparently shared.
And done. In the end he turned out to be another spineless motherfucker and I honestly want to throw up from it, shove it asshole.
6415593 It's so heartwarming to see just how much tolerance and sympathy this site has for people with depression. Congratulations.
Nicely done.
6415593 Galacter is biggest cunt troll.
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Well, it is kind of obvious that Luna cares very deeply for him, but real love isn't something overly obvious at this point. And with Thomas the depression blinders make it even harder to see what is there.
And the whole "They already know I love them so I don't need to actually say it." snit. Makes sense, because mares and stallions switch a lot of stuff that it would be Luna having that problem. I'd slap some sense into her but I fear I'd break my hand on her hard head. And would probably get arrested. Unless she's into that sort of thing... .
And the poor guy needs to stop filtering his profession though his worlds views on the matter. It's not a derogatory and shameful thing where he's at, but it's pretty hard to throw off even minor social ideals that you've grown up with when moving from one country to another let alone one universe to another.
6416884 In what way does mares and stallions switching stuff mean that Luna would have this problem? I'm afraid I didn't understand that part.
6416944 In the original draft, the talk had happened about 2 chapters ago. But I felt it kinda resolved things too early, so I've just kept moving it back as I've added more content.
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It is the ateeotype in our world that men can not say "I love you" to their female partner and instead dance around the subject with phrases like "Back to you" or "I do the same for you" when it is said to them.
And since mares take on the roles of men... .
Some good chapter !
Moonlight is definitively my favorite character. X'D
6419349 Makes sense.
6419399 There does seem to be a split between her and Talon. I wonder if I should do something to address that.
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Personally, Talon is far from being in my top 5 of favorites characters. I see her personality and her function inside the story, but I can't be emotionally implicated with her. Matter of tastes I guess.
6422746 That's actually a very good point. To the editor!
6414550 Unfortunately, depression is kind of a gray area for understanding. You either understand it because you personally, or someone you know, suffers from it, or you know it exists but don't know how to look for it.
Truth be told, I had a feeling, but wasn't quite sure if it was just that or if it was Thomas' personality. Backing down a lot like he does, doesn't necessarily mean he's got depression. It could just mean he's a pacifist. It could mean he's got confidence issues (He does, but I'm just saying it could be that he only has that). It could also mean he was a whimp. Any of these are viable reasons, and depression isn't the only answer possible. That said, you have pointed it out, and it does fit, so good on you for actually putting some depth into the reason and not taking the easy way out.
To me it sounds like Thomas is in for some big problems as the harem grows and inevitably incorporates othe males.
Every time I try to imagine Thomas I see a twelve year old boy. I tried to give him a beard but then I start seeing Tom hanks in castaway.
6616291 i think this is the best comment i have ever seen on fimfiction
I hope she means hisupper horn!
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Given what I vaguely recall my mom paying for my taekwondo training, that makes his kisses worth about $30 (assuming an hour long lesson). Sounds like a pretty damn good exchange rate to me.
Comma
A little more detail on the reference, I know rvb, but I need more context than caboose didn't understand. He barely understands anything.