Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Oh the build up this chapter has. Thomas has so got it coming and I am SO looking forward to it.
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6707761 Out of curiosity, what exactly do you think he has coming?
6707767 Meh. That's kind of close to how I imagine him. Of course she had sex with him. What else is a concubine for?
I liked this chapter. It's nice to see Luna and Thimas bond by having a date and the pony transformation spell scene was cute. I also liked Moonlight's obvious crush on his pony form and Thimas' appreciation of her naked shape. Add the fact that Talon is joining the date, and you can say that Thomas will have an interesting date next Monday.
6707878 Glad to hear it.
6707819 in my opinion lots of embarrassment ending with everypony having a satisfied smile.
6707821 YAAAY At least now I can go to sleep tonight without worrying Thomas being some weird teen.
BTW great fanfic, man.
How dare you lead in with this and not describe the thing! His mark has something to do with a tail I'm guessing, because of the lead in to that sentence but I want to know more about it!
It'd tell us a bit about Luna what she thinks makes a good representation of his "special talent".
It's impressive that Luna can do a tactical self-sustained illusion, a transformation would probably be easier than that. Still, she is an alicorn... .
"unlike". At first I thought Smartycorn had to lick the other guard. Neither are in your harem (yet) Luna! You shouldn't be having your guards do that sort of thing for your pleasure.
Oh, you do describe it, mean of you making us wait.
Nice dodge thete, very nice dodge.
Oh Thomas, you are not as subtle as you think you are.
"Talon".
But it is so much more fun to do "things" while others watch!
I feel sorry for Moonlight and Thomas, Talon and Lua teamup? They don't stand a chance.
Looking forward to a fun filled evening of friendly ribbing and teasing. And maybe griffon sexy times.
Dammit, Tali, what did Blue just say?... WHAT did she JUST say?
6707926 That was a good lead up, wasn't it. However, the mark is described later in the chapter.
Thanks for the catches.
No matter what happens, Thomas is screwed.
Oh just have Moonlight join them in bed already.
THIS is great. Talon is very smart and clever to "see" through the ilusion spell of Luna.
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What would be great.
I think that Talon joining in bed with Luna and Thomas would be amazing.
LOL
This is going to be good.
Oh yeah!!!
I like all the fun (or horror, depending on which perspective you look at) that just got lined up. Will Luna be mercilessly teasing Thomas and Moonlight? Will Talon? There is so very much that could happen from here.
6708319 But sex is so much better with extensive foreplay to build up anticipation!
6708120 It's basically his job description.
6708319 Patience
6708737 Hope so.
6708801 Well said.
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
I imagine Luna gave Thomas the face of 'beautiful Squidward'.
Mwahahahahahahahahahaha !!
I hope you'll make Moonlight suffer !
Why ? Dunno... I just want to see her suffering !
6709825 I'll consider it.
6710055 You're such a dear.
So apparently Luna spells 'subtly' like this:
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OMG Luna and Tohmas where so cute together in this chapter . And Tohmas was busted rubber neaking on Moonlight you can tell he likes what he sees .And they all where busted by Tali ,This is going to be a hell of a night now that she has joined.
6711217 Yup. You pretty much summed up all the things.
poor thomas i feel sorry
6716610 Don't worry. It gets worse from here.
6718316 Oh, well thats delightful.
6723288 Basically, but not quite.
That is a valid concern, and it will come up a number of times in the future. Thanks for reading.
This is the name os MY OC! XD Shining Sapphire!
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Keep trying to click the like button, hoping to sneak it up a notch further!
must read next chapter NOW!
I feel like there's a pronoun mixup in this sentence.
"Yes, and as such as were remiss in not giving thee an appropriate slave collar."
Sounds like he's set for lunch.
This should include making her put on a human illusion.
Obviously not.
Can't decide between snickering and dawwing.
If? Shouldn't that be when?
This'll be fun. I hope Thomas makes a fool of himself lol.
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*disgust
Combine the sentences by replacing the period with a comma.
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Excellent eye.