Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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I love this, you did really well with this chapter, everyone got good screen time and it was glorious!!
YAY! I'd love to see Talon come back! One of my most fav characters in this story! Super excited to see a new chapter keep up being awesome!
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As ever, happy to hear. And don't worry. Though it's proving surprisingly tricky, I'll bring her back soon enough.
Nice little wrap up to bring these characters into the fold. Although, the last chapter made me believe Honey and Surprise was going to be bond. Will we see some more interaction with Celestia conqubines? I almost forgot they were apart of the story.
And what about that stallion that put a tracker on Thomas? What was his name again?
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Not too sure. This story has gone in so many different directions from the flimsy excuse of a plan I started with. Talon appears to be a fan favorite, but I honestly can't think of much to do with the other concubines. Also, the guy with the tracker is definitely due for a return.
Thank god we're done with the clop chapters for a least a little bit. Like, I enjoy clop and all but it was like 4 or 5 straight chapters of it man.
Great work! Hope we see more from Talon.
This is denfinitly one of my favorite, 'occasionally get back to' stories. I am certainly interested in seeing what you can come up with next storyline.
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You know how we like our strong female role models.
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Understood. I went a little overboard in making sure everyone got equal screen time.
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As do many, it seems.
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And I hope I can deserve that interest.
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Hmm. That's something to consider. Fortunately these chapters seem to have exhausted me as much as everyone else, so it'll be a while before clop of any sort. The next ten or so will be plot and character oriented with only allusions to Equestria's sexual openness rather than full fornication. That said, the next clop was planned as another multi-parter, and stuff has already been written, but I'll go reread it and see if anything can be trimmed.
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She's more like a magical A.I. and yes, there are plans for her. She also showed up during the karaoke. Firestorm has been popping up here and there for a while, and I'm planning a little shakeup of the status quo to give him even more prominence... sort of.
Hmm.
As I said last chapter, I enjoyed the clop. However, I was surprised at the length of it. But that didn't bother me as much. I understand that this is a porn story. I'm more interested in you (the author) having fun writing it.
You do your best work when you have fun than when you are trying to work at making the story work. Unfortunately it shows as you rush those parts, and I don't blame you as I assume you write this as a hobby.
Bottom line, I enjoy reading your work the most when you have fun writing it regardless if it's advancing the plot, or if it's just plots (ha ha puns).
Thank you for posting.
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Appreciated
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Well it is pinkie after all.