• Member Since 9th Oct, 2014
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Laurai


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What I enjoy most is the way how you handled the MC. In the beginning you had someone who was (or seemed..) blatantly overpowered.
You managed to mould Arty into someone that has to step up his game pretty soon, he would clearly struggle on his own against the upcoming threat whom seems to be even more powerful than Arty himself.
I think its not very common for a story to hold the readers interest for an amount of words whom will soon surpass 3/4 of a million.
It's that kind of improvement that makes a story truly enjoyable.
Thanks for that.

Thanks for the fave on Star Eater! Thumbs up if you like it! What do you enjoy most about the story so far?

Thanks for the watch :)

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Glad I could evoke positive emotions. :rainbowlaugh:

your profile pic just makes me want to go "cheessssse burgerrrrrrrsssss" IDK why it just does

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