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Electuroo


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A few weeks have passed after Nightmare Moon's defeat and Princess Luna's freedom and she has returned to Equestria to rule once more by her sister Celestia's side. However, a mysterious young griffon is discovered, and the questions about this young unknown griffon grow as Celestia and many others try to find out how and where he came from.

No solid answers come and communicating with the young griffon is going to be more of a challenge then they could believe.

(The one rule is revealed in Chapter Six. If you wish to be spoiled, reveal the spoiler, but if not, read to Chapter Six. Also, if there is a better way of wording this, please let me know.)

The one rule is: Letting someone hold the Griffon's (Young one's) plush and returning it to him is for him to have absolute trust in someone without the need for words.

Chapter 1: Proofread by Truthseeker
Chapter 2 to 4: Proofread by Katarina Mau
Chapter 5.5: Checked over by Mr_Mopey
Chapter 65.5, 75.5: proofread by Akira Dragonborne
Chapter 99.25 to 100.75: Collaboration with Goldfur
Chapter 99.25 to 100.75: Proofread by Goldfur

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This story is a sequel to Through the Looking Glass


Cover art made by the one and only awesome Keyblade Pony. (Check out his awesome work at this link >>> http://the-keyblade-pony.deviantart.com/)

The everlasting darkness of the truth comes to light, the mirrors and the black flames hold secrets that will make the strongest of wills flutter at the thought. With two major events rapidly descending on the two worlds, what will it take to save them from everlasting darkness of Nilrem or the black flames of the Black Phoenix?

What forces behind these two great evils are set in motion and how would that be stopped?

As the foretold prophecy of the 21 mirrors making 22?

A/N: If anyone could help, I would like help with proofreading and editing not only this story but Through the Looking Glass, I had no one able to check it out for me

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The story of Soarin McLighting, an airshow spitfire pilot and ex-RAF test pilot for new planes in the United Kingdom. His normal happy life has been plagued by dreams of a land of magical talking ponies. Unknown to him this would soon become his reality in more ways then one...When his tale of meeting Wonderbolts unexpectedly takes off...

Proofread by Joesephius_Loewe (Prologue to Chapter 12)
Proofread by That Loopy Author (Chapter 13 onwards)

Story has now continued.

Rated Teen for language and some romantic points

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The life he once knew and the life he once had was all gone in a single moment of pure darkness. A young colt finds himself without memories of whom or what he was.With nothing left to remind him of what life were before he keeps moving on, with darkness always trailing close behind. The light of magic leads him to a whole new beginning to a whole new life. What will this new beginning bring for him?

Permission granted to use the commission made drawing that Skyheavens made for me.


Story being checked and edited by:Cold Spike (Prologue and chapter 1, 6 and 7)
Joesephius_Loewe (Chapter 8 - chapter 30)
Josh Satt (Chapter 31)
Berry Delight (Chapter 32, 33, Reunited with a Twist: Armour and Sunny)
Sunflower1414 (Chapter 34 to 42)
QueenOfTheBadlands1 (Chapters 2 to 5 plus Scootaloo POV chapter)

Update: First story I created and with the help of my awesome friend Joesephius_Loewe proofreading we hit the mark of 101 thumbs up with 105 watchers at 01/07/2014. Thank you everypony for enjoying this story so far and try to continue to keep you enjoying the story of Zaps Apple.

Featured: 01/08/2014, 17/7/2016, 20/03/2017, 8/9/2017, 1/2/2018, 23/5/2019, 5/6/2019, 21/7/2019 and 29/7/2019

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Two lives from two different worlds encounter the same orb at the same time that will throw their normal lives upside down. They now have to adapt to each other lives and keep this from those they know around them.

Will they be able to fool their friends and family till they both find a way to return to their true bodies and worlds? Or is there a greater work involved with this?

Note: I made some changes to the summary to see if this fixes any of the problems that spoke of. I am unsure if it has, if not tell me where I am going wrong

Note 2: The story is now completed, this was a one off story with no continuing, no connection to any of my stories that in progress still. I just did this out of pure randomness and within a few weeks. I know the grammar and such is out of context in some places and people reading it get easily distracted but sometimes just ignore it and read the story lol. Life too short to just complain about grammar.

The story was a random idea and wasn't really taking things seriously to be truthful. Well I leave you all to read this if you wish. And I am going back to my primary stories that in progress, the ones I really enjoy making. ^_^

Well this is completed and closed. Enjoy reading it!

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Upon the mirrors peer through the looking glass to a mirror of worlds. A magical door way opens and new endless possibilites open up. What are the meaning of the mirrors and why are they appearing two by two through both worlds of humans and ponies? What is the connection and is there a darker history that time forgotten?

21 makes 22...

Note: I noted fair number saying there is grammar errors in my story but the thing is I can't see these errors you speak of, If anyone would be willing to help me, I would be grateful for it and to point out the grammar issues. So I can learn and see how I made these mistakes instead of those saying... "There too many grammar errors it hurting my eyes and brain" that doesn't help me explain the problems.

So I ask kindly to point these out instead of complaining about it.

Note 2: If anyone willing to help me lead a hand, I be welcomed to it for proof reading this story and make it sound better for those to read. If anyone willing to lead a helping hand I be most grateful.

Electuroo

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A famous stunt dare devil and a thief that leaves money at places he breaks into, what is the connection between the two and why both deceed on Ponyville? And does Rainbow Dash and Flutteryshy know who this thief really is? (one shot chapter story)

I made this story seem like it was part of a episode, it was something I thought up and decided to create lol.

Also my character reflects some of the differculties I had in real life with bullying (which continues by groups of pointless teens and young adults mostly when I am at work or on the streets when they notice me -_-)

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