Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Only noticed one real error, where you say Dawn picked "un" instead of "up"
Really pumping out these chapters today, huh? Not that I'm complaining, I'm just being spoiled. You spoil us.
So those two finally know, or already knew, but now we know they know, you know?
Looking forward to more, as usual.
(My error quoting skills are hindered at the moment as I'm on mobile)
Woah four chapps in a day is it Christmas?
great chapters finally caught up again
How does one see a song? Probably supposed to say sing.
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There we go.
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I was reading it as "see that song exist" kind of phrasing rather than actually seeing. Like the phrase "see to it"
So in this case "You'll see that song isn't sung"
So much cuteness today. I think I have diabetes now.
Today was a good day. (4 chapters that just fly by)
What’s the cursed song?
Awesome flurry of chapter updates, leaving a big happy smile on my face. Thank you for the new chapters, I'm honestly excited to see how Dawn's story will progress.
Naturally, instead of singing the song that never ends, Pinkie begins to sing this instead (2) SOUL EATER Excalibur Song - YouTube
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Basically this.
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https://youtu.be/0U2zJOryHKQ?si=ZrG_9ldiZDuYBPeb
I am not sure if this a typo or a pun, and at this point I am too afraid to ask.
I nearly missed that Starlight had apologised at the start of the chapter and was wondering why Dawn didn’t think he had broken his pinkie promise. Shame we didn’t see his or Starlight’s thoughts/feeling during the time. I’m still wonder if Starlight was just burying the issue to get Dawn to talk to her again and that her feelings are still festering inside her.
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It could have been worse I was initially thinking of “I know a song that would get on your nerves.”. The song that never ends was my second choice.
Going over the lore blog post I notice that the Alicorns all have an alternate (with Dawnbreaker appearing in chapters containing Celestia’s POV). Dawn isn’t listed though so I am wondering if he has one or will have one form at some point. Also if Cadence‘s alternate exists yet as we have yet to have a POV from her. (I suspect we will see the answer in the wedding arc.)
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I am suddenly worried about which genres Fluttershy enjoys given that she is the quiet one.
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Cadance Nightmare is probably HeartBreaker or something similar.
With Dawn we can only guess, I don't even remember what he is Alicorn of. Or even if it was stated.
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It’s a pun. I think they even use Mane-ga in the show
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More like NutCracker.
Personal head-canon is that any alicorn or pony with alicorn potential is host to one of the seven deadly sins.
Celestia has Pride, Luna has Envy, Cadance has Lust and Twilight has either Greed or Gluttony, I'm leaning most towards gluttony for consuming knowledge and hayburgers.
Both Sunset and Starlight I would say lean towards Wrath.
Cursed song?
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I've always preferred Nightmare Cadance's name to be Decadence.
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That sounds more like Rarity’s to me.
4/6 of the future Bearers know about Dawn now. How will Rainbow and Rarity find out? The former will definitely get excited about flying with Dawn. He hasn’t had a good chance to open those wings up and really cut loose yet. She’ll be stoked… Rarity might break.
I’m glad Starlight and Sunburst figured some things out and are on good terms with Dawn now.
Good job, Trixie. You, too, Twilight.
Good that Starlight and Dawn made up, so Trixie is still part of his herd fair enough.
Dawn setting ground works to move along some plot points.
Also pinkie calling Dawn and Applejack as family is so her off course silly pants, their a family true and true
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Nice
Hide a speaker, then play that cursed song at full volume on loop.
🎶 Somepony started singing it not knowing what it was, and how Pinkie is in our heads forever just because this is the song that never ends. 🎶
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The first time I heard this song was on Facebook.
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This is exactly the mood I was going for. GJ.
I always laugh when they make a joke with the song that never ends hahahahahaha
I thunk you meant up unless Dawn has started speaking prench
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You don't want that curse brought upon you. Trust me
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Let's say it's an annoying little song which loops on itself. Considering weird interactions of songs with magic in their world you really wouldn't want to risk it.
Manega....god damn horse puns!
For those of us who grew up with Lamb Chop....
Smile HD starts playing
Thankyou for saving us all Dawn