Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Shouldn’t she say ma?
When will Dawn alert the bat ponies of Nightmare Moon’s return?
Moondancer is turning into a reliable gym buddy.
Some birds can swim pretty well, but they usually have webbed feet. The Pegasi’s technique would be interesting to see. Could probably make some imaginative high diving spectacles.
Never considered solid water application of the cloud-walking system.
I wonder how the Ponyville herd will signal to Dawn… impromptu visit to Canterlot on a holiday? A letter? Maybe a discussion of interest with his family herd?
Will the Summer Sun Celebration be somewhere else? Could there be a special trip for Dawn and Twilight?
Keep trying with Twilight, Dawn!! We believe in you ~!
So their two forms of casting interesting? I suppose the two are similar to sorcery vs wizardry.
What is the runic method based on? The runes themselves or made completely up?
Didn't think this one throu Rares.
Is this normal for the setting? This seems to be an easy way to give somepony a complexion.
Trixie should be given a raise for keeping Starlight possible villainous thoughts at bay
As always thank you for the new chapter
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Yes Pear’s comment was normal. I did some world building on herds a while back in the notes or maybe just in the comments… can’t remember now but basically so long as two ponies are not blood related it’s AOK and herds will sometimes invite single mares with colts (from a stud contract) into their herd specifically to get with their daughters and provide support/ a loving family for that mare.
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He probably won’t go find the bats until after his four years of schooling are up but he will probably do some preparation before then.
Man I hope Dawn talks to Twilight soon.
Nice
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I suppose fair.
Are single contracted mothers a common, uncommon or rare occurrence?
Question: are stallion weaker then mares in some department? Or they the same?
Do alicorns also have sub-species characteristics or abilities?
Nah jit trippin 💀💀
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Yes single mares are common in big cities and mare only herds are common in both cities and small towns. Stallions will often sell their services and traveling Rodeos are just one way earth pony studs show themselves off.
Stallions have the potential to be physically stronger than mares, if they actually trained, but they are often more of the home bodies. thanks to the gender gap stallions don’t often fight since they don’t need to compete for attention.
Yes.
Rarity just realized that the colt she after might have been caught already. Talk about not thinking. And starlight needs to calm down considering it will be years before they are close to adulthood and they have to get to know each other and plus dawn is gonna be busy with lessons every so often. That's part of life. If she needs a little extra time with him why not see when they both have time off and spend together. Dawn isn't trying to ignore anyone he just trying to live his life and be a good friend. But if she doesn't quit overreacting she gonna lose him before they are adults.
"Sweet Home Alabama."
Sorry Rarity but your a little late on that!
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Yeah forget to include the bit of world building explanation on that. It’s there now.
Idk AJ is a sister know and well I know I would denie only on that it would be 2 weird having some 1 you called sister to lover
Enjoyable chapter. Starlight needs to cool her jets a bit i think.
Ah the Japanese & Korean legal interpretation of step siblings. Though it is still generally taboo for them irl
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Yeah the gender gap makes it a bit harder to ignore in Equestria.
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I feel this brony song is rather fitting.
It'll be Okay
Interesting story so far. Thanks!
So im wondering about lust poisoning, is that why chrisi is cookoo for cokoopuffs?
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also if Chrisi joins the herd i think shes gonna start out like:
The virgin yandere: “I saw the way you were looking at that girl. Don’t worry, I’m going to make sure that slut doesn’t tempt you again.
And then wind up as:
The chad yangire: “I saw the way you were looking at that girl. She’ll be waiting for you tonight. Huh? Look, don’t ask stupid questions, she’s going to say yes. Fi~ne, I’ll ask her knifely. Hm? No, you’re just hearing things.”
(yes i am quoteing someone, no i dont know who wrote it, it was in someones sig.)
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Chris I won’t be joining Dawns herd.
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Sadage. Was liking the Yandere angle someone came up with.
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....i just noticed the auttocorrupt lol. Chris I instead of chrisi.