Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Nice
Seems like Twilight starting not liking the idea that Dawn is dating Starlight and Trixie . Perhaps she's thinking it should be her that dating Dawn for he doesn't leave her or Spike behind.
Well a nice date and oo tension is building up.
Spike first word! hoy boy it time to celebrate! poor twilight getting her heart wrecked by a rollercoaster
Is that midnight spark forming dangerous.
Looks like Twily has a little crush
Yup. This means you’ll have to put out some, Dawn.
Atta boy.
Ah, teens and their whole ‘not talking about the social issue’ thing. I’m rooting for you, Twilight!! … and the others.
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Her future sister is the Alicorn of love.
It seems that Twilight already demonstrates the signs of a magical alter ego, despite not being an alicornium, is it a sign that it will be or being the element of magic caused this development? I say it for those who did not notice that (which I don’t think there are many) since there were already signs for it, the only example I remember is the Celestia and DayBreaker, also mention Pinkie but Pinkie is... Pinkie
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And her being a future alicorn well everyone besides their fellow alicorns and those closest to them will definitely encourage them to start a family together. As for starlight and the nobles I think if her show self could handle helping twilight stand up to neighsay when he tried to ruin her school then I'm sure she can handle other nobles.
I am quite eager to see how Dawn will handle everyone's desired relationship with him.
Just imagining Nobles lobbing their fillies at Dawn like Fireballs. Dawn running in a Panic as screaming fillies come flying through the sky.
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That was mentioned before? I don’t remember anymore... But never mind! That just means more character development!
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Who is Panic and why Dawn is stuck in her?
I deadass just spent the last 24 hours reading this and I regret nothing. It's incredible and I can't wait to keep going great story 10/10 would recommend!
It's normal and natural for humans too ^^ just less common
(edit: Yes, people can have whatever kind of relationship they want as long as all parties consent. Polyamory is normal and fine, if not for everyone. Deal with it.)
Have you ever read the IDW comics?
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No, just watched the show, why?
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Oh, the comics are wild. There's even a Transformers crossover. I haven't read them, being the lazy ass that I am, but I seriously would recommend checking them out at some point.
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Oh yeah, the comics are wild. They're also plenty entertaining. My favorite villains to come from the comics is the Umbrum and a 5th dimensional worm that eats fiction which causes realities to intertwine. There's even a Maleficent pony who enters the MLP verse because of his actions.
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They're pretty good in my opinion. My favorite arc is Reflections and Fiendship is Magic. You can read them on YouTube if you want.
honestly I thought Chrysalis was going to be the maid's daughter, also I think twilight is going to go nightmare in the future if my gut is right. Could be wrong.
Cute. Wondering if twiggles is going to get in on the action before heading to ponyvile ?
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Oh? Were you thinking Gabby? Because i ship her and spike. Also maybe spike and smoulder too.
(Or were you not thinking about catbribs at all?)
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My thought process is Gilda and dash know each other so that's a potential way in.
My brain just came up with the thought of chrysalis gloating during the wedding and then the changeling queen that is unique to this story (i forgot her name) comes in with a steel chair, reflexively calls celestia "her shimmering sunshine" or something that is their little lovey dovey nickname. Then follows up with "this is not how i wanted to reveal that i was a changeling."
(Note this is after chrysalis hits her with that beam fight)
So i was thinking, what if starlight somehow goes off to do something else due to breakup or something, maybe even traveling with Trixie (or even time spent away causes her to loose head mare status) this would make it so twilight is head mare by a delicious twist of fate and starlight has to get back in or something.
Edit: Also i approve of the idea of chrisi being after that dawn booty. Maybe have her run away from starlight because she can't have him all to herself? (Or maybe that's just when she breaks and realizes her chasing him is futile?(
Oooh idea, she uses her photographer disguise to try and get into the herd, shes oblivious to the fact that Dawn knows who she is because he watched the show.
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Now my brain is going on about "lust sickness" as a disease for changelings. It's actually just them being in love, but because their food source is love they don't realize that's what the sensation is. (It could also potentially break chrisi when she learns that its what the other races feel)
Dawww
Moment like this are the only reason I even picked up this fic
Hope to see more
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He was on a date
Twilight he literally told you yesterday that he expected being there special somepony so you really shouldn't be surprised
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That would a hard pass, since her BBBFF already threatened the colt from approaching her.
Drama llama is centering in!