Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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this has horrifying impliations on why equestria can use gold as its currency. imagine if you did not pay your taxes so the ammount was taken from you. litrely
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Metal as fuck.
Oh snap! These guys aren’t just jerks. They’re serious villains. MC got super lucky today… unless Celestia knew something? …Meh, probably not this time.
Sunburst, younger brains absorb information better than older ones. Dawn, you go ahead and try to catch up with Twilight. Don’t let Sunburst burst your effort bubble.
Keep trying with Lyra, Dawn. I believe in you.
Trixie hasn’t shown off her cape yet, right? Might have been looking for some affirmation, Dawn, but … dudes and subtlety. You know.
Very fun story so far, I am greatly enjoying. Keep it up.
S*** going down a lot of taken from the last part of the chapter
I'm a sucker for cuddle piles. I adore Trixie being like this. Though I really want Dawn to help out Lyra asap. She doesn't deserve sadness.
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Wait so you could pay off your debts and lose weight at the same time?
Aside from that the way it's described is a really weird way to implement it as it sounds as if the transformation is only skin deep which should barring magical shenanigans kill them either by suffocation (wouldn't be able to move to breathe) or by dehydration.
Would have been better to do like discord where they were transformed into solid stone/gold but still aware but yet not physically still alive preventing the need for extra shenanigans.
There isn't an apparent reason for why they would want to keep the insides squishy and since they're talking about selling him as a statue it would seem undesirable for it to contain squishy bits that may bring up unwanted questions later.
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Gilded is when something is just covered in gold and it’s all their power can do. So yes it would kill him and they will sell off the body to some other twisted noble or bad griffin for a gold wrapped snack.
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i was thinking it was on purpose they kept the insideds squishy. fair enough though. is the gold permenently gold or is this magic reversable by some means other then a spell that does the opposite
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Wow didn't expect that, glad I asked.
I want to make a comment about how weird gold covered food would be but IRL some ultra rich people do actually eat food covered in gold (I saw a clip about a $70,000 pizza recently).
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It could be reversed but would need to be done before they pony inside starved. They can still breathe a bit since it’s just the fur and skin turned to gold. Theoretically they could crack open the gold but he would bleed out.
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did the eyes turn aswell?
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I would say yes if he didn’t close his eyes. Magic is weird like that.
Caught an extra word and two typos.
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TY as always
So at this point I recalled that little bit where Dawn thought something Forest mentioned about how they were worried about his condition possibly crippling his magic, and now I’m thinking… Sunburst’s magic is crippled. Does he have Earth pony ley lones? Does Dawn need teach him how to cast with his hooves?
It really is odd the story mentioned he wasn't a morning pony at the beginning and yet he seems to consistently awaken before dawn...
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Probably something cutie mark related rather than a conscious choice
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yep it was just his human half that wasn’t a morning person but as a pony he likes them well enough. And yeah it’s his mark walking him up so he has come to accept it.
Wow, his extended family is certainly... something. Fuck, that shit is terrifying.
I see intelligence does not exist in this noble house. Like what do you think will happen when the statue explodes from gas build-up and a corpse is found?
Unless they sell to someone who is just as much of a monster that is. Though I am sure there are easier ways to make money then possibly getting black mailed/Caught over what I am sure is pocket change to them.
Maybe they just get a kick out of making everyone around them suffer.