Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Nice
What about Lyra and good things Spike wasn't there that could have been really funny.
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No worries Lyra will make an appearance again soon.
What a coincidence that all these young ponies happened to come into season at the same time. Strange, huh? /s
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Just the elements.
Does Dawn actually hear Pinkie when she interjects on the situation? (You better run Dawn.)
I don't know if he just thinks it's his own intuition talking to him, he doesn't hear it at all and it's just Pinkie beaking the fourth wall, or does he straight up know that Pinkie is talking to him through her other worldly powers?
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So he does kinda feel it thinking it’s his own intuition but he doesn’t hear it as words. That’s just for the reader.
finally caught up after starting this
Did you early upload on accident? Says you have another chapter called "Rough start to a new semester"
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Yeah accidentally published while editing. It will be up later though.
Wonder how Twilight will behave going forward. Could be lots of options now that wouldn’t have been available without Dawn in the story. I hope for an increase in the ‘adorkable’ factor. And Dawn, just don’t shake her hoof later.
I think Rarity’s having the worst time being that she has no close support system.
Celestia, Dawn is as far as you know an innocent colt asking an innocent question. That seems like the most appropriate time for such a question to be asked. Princess, are you awkward about this stuff?
So to wrap it up:
Twilight and Dawn nearly went to 3 base in an instant.
Applejack get locked up in horny jail.
Rarity is making waterfalls.
Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash upgrade to friends with benefits.
Pinkie devouring her canon husband namesake.
Interesting take on the heat cycle.
Hoy colt if Bright Mac was alive he'll be tasked with a Hercules task with the apple herd during heat season.
Question. In canon Celestia kinda like knew who were going to be the Elements of Harmony and was one of the reasons she send Twilight to Ponyville and also knew they'll be the ones who will "save" Luna.
Was she expecting Dawn and all the shenanigans he's making in this new let's calling timeline?
[Not. A. One.You are in denial Pinky
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Well..the element's have the cutie mark shape...last I recall that was never explained
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Or running for the hills...camping sounds like a safe idea to me
Hmmm never seen heat on a male before, normally its Rut.
ROFL. I still ship em.
As i was reading was wondering if the main six were all going through it at the same time.
....I cant tell if this is a reference to her thinking of him or just an in joke.
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ohhhhhh, that’s why the sandwich, had not really understood the joke because I only saw once the husband of Pinkie in a fic, did not go so far in the canon
I'm*
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The elements in their default forms were generic hexagonal crystals. They gained their shape in S01:E02 when the bearers first activated them.
No i want the oc have main 6 harem(and more) pls
I don't think I'm okay with a story where 8 year olds are so horny that they cannot be trusted to not rape each other. Like, that's fucked right? It's not just me? Why is this something that needs to be in this story? I really, really hope that this isn't plot relevant.
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Well, keep in mind they are ponies, not humans, and ponies on earth have children as young as 4… technically even humans used to have kids at 10-12 before modern medicine allowed us to live past an average age of 40. But no, modern ponies don’t typically have offspring until their 20s. Dawn’s parents are in their late 30s and almost 40 and depending on the pony type/density of magic in this AU can change the max age a pony can live for. Like Granny Smith will live till like 150.
But to alleviate your fears, no it’s not super relevant to the plot just a fact of this AU.
Noticed Celestia completely dodged the question! 👀
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While they did say they were 8 and 9 years old before it's been a while, since then. They are probably 1 1/2 years older now. Sure, still not the best, but they are ponies aka herd creatures.
Pinkie knows what Pinkie wants