Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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while not incorrect, gave shouldn't be capitalized. Spike on the other hand, should.
Daring Do
unlike Gave from earlier, Do SHOULD be capitalized as it's part of a name. And Daring has one too many r's
Well this is cute.
Not a lot to say tho until something more happens. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Ty as always and glad you’re liking it so far. Lots more to come and the action will be picking back up soon.
Is that Harmony freaking out or some other force? Also, would it really matter if they were friends earlier? I’d think it would make more sense and improve their connection to the Elements as a group.
Good chapter found this for you. She did seam friendly enough [seem]
Nice
How many times must you forget to capitalize Spike!!?
Thanks for the chapter looking forward to our next one
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Well you won’t have to wait too much longer as it should be out today. Just doing some editing so it’s not total garbage then I’ll let you all catch the rest.
I really enjoyed this chapter. It is interesting to see a version of MLP where Twilight meets her future friends early.
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It’s the dang autocorrect. It doesn’t want to treat it as a name so I have to manually fix it a bunch.
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Yeah Dawn isn’t perfect but he tries hard.
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By the time Nightmare Moon returns the Mane 6 will already be at the "Rainbow Power" level of friendship they used against Tirek
Harmony can't bring Dawn here and then complain when the timeline is different.
Very curious as to who is apparently panicking about the disorder, as that implies they know what canon events should be and when in comparison to how they're going here. Also interesting that they've been unheard of until now when that distinctive event was pushed forward, when Dawn himself would have indicated something amis even before ascending. 🤔
Wouldn't it be funny if it was the Tree who started panicking and doing what it could go realign things toward canon? We don't think that has been done before, actually, at least not in an active sense...
What? The Sacred Timeline is bi#ching? Is the TVA and Miss Minutes coming?
As always thanks for the new chapters
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It’s not, just ‘pinging’ him.
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Still odd. Dawn is well aware the timeline has been subverted. I don't think he needs notifications from Harmony. Even then I'm not sure why Harmony would be surprised. I'm sure it will be explained later. But for now I'm not sure what Harmony is trying to get at.
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ahhh then referred to that Twilight arrived earlier than expected, had not understood the meaning of that parrafo xd
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a little doubtful, if the tree tried to do something, the distorted time lines would have had a more cheerful tone instead of what happened in any of them
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Don’t worry in a few chapters we will see what she’s worried about.
You know, after reading all the chapters up to this point, I realized that it would be better if the MC only had two couples, it could be Fluttershy and Twilight or neither of the two and yes others, but not a big harem, since This is becoming something that is giving a lot of thought to that particular topic, it is too repetitive and I don't think it is good for the story to divide the MC's attention into many couples.
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Harmony doesn't always mean happiness. Actually, in one fic it was very much the opposite and the dystopian results heavily corrupted things....
Looks like the whole family's all get together how can you do is start playing some games together have BBQ
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I've seen a fic where Harmony is the villain and tries to bring about entropy which is basically the death of everything
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Yeah, in a certain light the utter dissolution of differences would fit the definition of harmony...
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There’s actually a couple where Harmony turns bad either because Twilight went back in time or a human shows up and messes with her gran plan. No worries about that here though.
??? Idk y it is a twisted timeline isn't every timeline twisted by that logic and since there is infinite timelines each is unique but not twisted worped or anything ealls it is the wright timeline for the right universe it is in if every time line and universe are the same thear wontbe no what if this happens in no storys what happened should happen and all that other stuff
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I just needed a name. It’s not easy naming every chapter.
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Lol fine how early is she meeting theam in years and days???
Bounding over fluffy filly's way to go Twilight
Did I mention I'm loving this story?
This Twilight Sparkle is way ahead of the show's Twilight Sparkle, in regards to fraternizing.
I like it.
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Harmony to Dawn: *Ping* You've got Mail.
*Ping* You've got Mail.
*Ping*
*Ping*
*PingPingPingPingPINGPINGPING......* GODDAMNIT DAWN, STOP MESSING WITH THE SACRED TIMELINE, AND CHECK YOUR DAMNED MESSAGES!!!
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Luv, Harmony.
Finally got the time to speed read the fic, nice dynamic with how Dawn is with his potential herd and many side stories or setup with chrysalis, storm king etc...
I thought Trixie didn’t know Dawn was an alicorn. She just doesn’t react at all. Did I miss a reveal in a prior chapter?
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It’s the great and Powerful Trixie… she rolled with it but will ask later.