Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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It's amazing this family keeps getting worse. Holy shit.
Oh wow.... I do believe that the grandparents have no idea the kind of shit tsunami they just stirred up. It's about to come crashing down on their heads.
Poor Lyra. She didn't deserve this.
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TY should be fixed.
I'm just on the edge of my seat when reading this story. I got completely spoiled with 22 chapters already posted, very eager for the next update. Hopefully, Lyra is able to hold it together and is being treated well enough.
Subterfuge, my guy. You are a valuable asset to them and you have time -except maybe to help Lyra. Once you find her, you can start to slowly pick them apart.
Oh! Maybe NMM can teach you a message, dispel, and or combat spell? Maybe a link to Lyra? You can still cast with your hoof.
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Agreed. Hellfire cometh.
I can't figure it out so does he have two moms or does he have a mom and a dad. I wonder what kind of magic he's going to learn and will lyra be the same when he finds her
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My guess is unicorn mom gave herself a dong and impregnated other mom via magic.
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From what I rememeber he is in a herd. His Dam and Sir are his bio parent while those he calls mom and dad are members of the herd.
So basically he have one Dam and Sir but many moms and dads. His Sir is a deadbeat tho.
What a messed up family
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There aristocrats or at least how they act is. Don't know about inbreeding yet but it's not of the table given how they act
Will you receive the wrath of DayBreaker and not Sunbutt? You better "Empiecen a Rezar" (start praying)
Nice to see update again. Looks like Dawn is going to be and Apple So, I wonder if he will have to adopt the name too. So it really looks like Dawn has his mother's blood flowing through him if it's a spell unique to his family line, with what ever ritual they did to create him. I am looking forward to see what other trick they will try to use to twist Dawn to their line of thinking. Keep it up.
Lose ends should be loose ends. The internet is practically rampant with people using loose instead of lose, it's almost refreshing to see the opposite wrong usage.
Lying about his parent's deaths was a terrible move unless they seriously plan to keep one of Celestia's prized pupils hidden away like that. Their fall will be glorious!
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he isn't a pupil of celestia, only twilight is,but he does have the interest of her and her attention since he's a higher tier unicorn similar to twilight. Shame that Celestia is gonna vaporize his terrible family members but hopefully he gets a good swing at em before.
The foreshadowing about the possible issues with Lyra's homelife didn't make much sense to me before, but now it's all come into focus. That was really well-planned and executed