Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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What a bizarrely casual chapter. Other than Shining being somehow knowledgeable and antagonistic to changelings, everyone is just kind of rolling with it.
"I was the only one who herd him properly." heard. Not actually dealing with herds, but hearing.
"pony who shall not be named" shalel. Unless he was saying that with a weird accent, this would be correct.
Well, those secrets are out now and officially between the bunch. I wonder if Celestia will ever mention Daybreaker to them tho. Probably not.
I love how Dawn's joke about being Spike's dad just kinda became an accepted reality after a bit.
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Nah, he's saying her name will never be Shale, which, being a mineral, could be a Pie family name.
The bit with the enslavement collar was concerning but I highly doubt Dawn is gonna turn into Sombra but with collars instead of helmets
Like the chapter kinda wanted to see Celestia talk to that guard who was basically accusing Dawn but still a great chapter. can't wait to see more chapters. Do you have a idea of how long until you get to the start of Canon. I'm really excited to see Celestia's reaction to the fact that Luna and Dawn know each other.
Why do I feel like this is four shadowing for the caller in the future?
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Please let it be destroyed
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I have a few more bigger arks and just trying to progress time without to many large skips so it will be a while before NMM. In hindsight I probably should have made them all a bit older but live and learn.
pegasus
Also seconding the bit about shining. How could he know about changelings? IIRC in the show they weren't publicly known prior to the wedding incident and from what I can remember and have in my notes it's the same here.
Then that brings up some other things like if it's because he's a guard why would they only tell of their existence and not actually have any countermeasures whatsoever? Like one was dating the princess for years and nopony besides dawn noticed.
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So in this AU Shiny knows because he is a high level guard and Changelings are one of those facts that’s not exactly secret but it also isn’t taught or talked about openly. My mindset about the show was he did know about them but obviously couldn’t do anything since he was mind controlled hence the threat alert… he knew something was wrong but couldn’t share it.
Also idk why my auto correct has a need to capitalize pegasus.
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Yeah Cadence is just happy Celestia found love and Twilight’s brain just switched to academic mode. Shining is the only cautious one since Dawn knows Changelings can be ‘reformed’ by giving love.
I guess they Dawn got two options when ponies and Nobles another country's leaders ask who of his parents option one he tells the truth who is his parents are and No Doubt they will be harassed by Nobles and other countries leaders to marry him off to to their daughters try to kill or kidnapped his family. option two Dawn and Celestia lie and say to the Nobles and other countries leaders that Dawn is her son and hopefully keep his parents out of Harm's Way. I would go with option two
Cadance, thinking to herself: that love connection certainly is stronger now, but it's gained some interesting colors I usually don't see much outside.... *blushes* oh my....
Twilight's progression is now much more drastically altered. How can she compete when her rival has changed species entirely! 😅
He still has that damn slave collar! I do NOT like the idea that he still has that nor the fact he just made is possible for it to be used again unlike when it was solid gold.
I can see this being useful but at the same time can see this biting him on the ass HARD! Really praying hard on the former that the author does with this cursed thing!
Edit: It shouldn't be possible for collar to be used on Dawn since he would be his own master because it's tied to his family blood line. WOOHOO that's half of my worries gone!
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He doesn't actually have that option. His grandparents where put to trial. They are already nobles to begin with. The Apple side will only be safe for so long before that gets found out. Unless they just straight up separate but that's not going to happen
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Yeah there will be some chaos from it for a bit but luckily as a male alicorn nobles will try to kiss up to him first.
Good chapter
Good 👍
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All right pretty good argument but what if she tells them she let Dawn be raised around normal family of ponies to have a tease of a normal life to live among.
What's wrong with being queen? Or Queen Faust is the one and only?
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Dang it! Chekhov's Gun...
As always thanks for the new chapter
And your mom's a soon-to-be alicorn
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She still has a few years but yep, he won’t have to worry about losing his parents.
good chapter glad this you're still here.❤
Hmmm...
Seems to have some sinister enchantments still. The gold seems to have been at least suppressing them, but now it's active again. I wonder what the full extents of this shall be.
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Pegasus is a character from mythology. I think the word pegasus derives from Pegasus which was the name of a winged horse character.
Good talk.
Nice
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The fact that with simply questioning of students from his school or someone simply being paid to look at records would show otherwise.
That or just one reporter catching a glimpse of the crowned prince at ponyville giving everything away.
Secrets like there and NOT something you can simply make go away. To many people know of him before hand. He can't even hide what he looks like to see his family because unlike before NOW people know what to look for. Where before no one was even looking. All because Celestia with 1000 plus years of experience can't keep from rushing about without thinking.
There is only one chance of Dawn keeping it under wraps and that's by keeping his identity a secret of the castle. Sure the guards or maids will talk. People will get suspicious but for a time it would only been seen as a rumor. Up until some zealot noble decides to do something drastic like drop a flower pot on his head to cause him to drop his illusion
Aw~! Twilight has accepted Dawn’s parental place. Time to have that talk with Starlight, Dawn.
That collar might be useful on anyone who resists capture and/or reform. *cough*Sombra*cough*
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It’s already slated for somepony else.
I’m just gonna post this.
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Princess is not an absolute authority. Queen without a King or in a matriarchal society is. Neither one of them want to be feared or revered any more than they already are. Besides, usually there is only one Queen and they are two with Luna as the hidden third. There could be any number of princesses, though, so they can be a diarchy, triarchy or even a pentarchy. Unofficially Celestia already is an absolute authority. No need to reaffirm it
And ye, let's keep our Goddess Faust as the only Queen, to give less reasons to the population to associate them with gods. Fear is one thing, blind reverence is much worse. None of them want to deal with fanatical cults any more than they already have to.
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Yep Faust is the only pony queen. Celestia is technically the "High Princess"
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Russian Tzar was Great Prince, not king (and tzar literally means just Governor).
Duke/Duchess also once was title of country ruler
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If I ever need a changeling OC to fill a spot I don’t want to use thorax in, I’ll name them Herbie.
It's so cute to see her embracing it XP It started out as a joke, but I'm not sure if she really understood that