Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Nice to see an update again, keep it up.
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I did debate about that or maybe another Pony takes her spot, like Moondancer turns it into a village of lonely bookworms and Twilight almost falls for it.
Everypony return safely and some needed revelation were made, lets hope they get a follow through.
So Lyra the first of the herd, thought not officially but still
Well let's see how the trial will go. (And let's not jinx it ya all)
I noticed that there aren't any dark tags.
You three owe him each a cider.
Take that to the bank, colt.
I think Celestia is going to have some issues in the future. Twilight cleanses Luna. Maybe Dawn will cleanse the older sister? A second set of Elements, maybe? What would those even be? Wisdom, Peace, um… Gentleness, Truth or Justice or Honor, maybe Empathy though that’s usually attributed to Starlight…?
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Maybe instead some of dawn grandparents old associated instead?
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They only allow so many tags.
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Oh, Idea! Won’t be for a while though since need to make it through school and all the big baddies.
Nice
So Daybreaker is quite active. Like any container, suppress the contents too much and it'll all explode out one day.
Maybe a history of being highly intelligent apes helps when it comes to traumatic events or well Dawn has the memories of an adult male who has seen author knows on the internet and Lyra is used to hiding her pain.
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Nightmare Moon, Discord, chrysalis, Sombra, Tirec. Ye a lot of opponent.
Not to mention many antagonist Razor, diamond dogs, Trixie, what ever else villain of the day.
Ponyvills has a fiasco every Tuesday or Saturday it seems
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No Trixie at least. I may find a way to throw in the alicorn amulet just because.
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Well another ex noble now exiled or outlaw come to get his piece. Dawn: Wonder why that keeps happening
I'm surprised discord didn't get in touch with dear little Dawn with a proposal to become his disciple.
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I plan to have Discord surprised by his existence. I find it more fun when even he doesn’t know everything going on but works with it.
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Discord better do a double take, remake 3 list with a board calculation like a mad scientist and then throw it all into a some gaping maw he made in reality, and proceeds like it all part of the plan.
seriously why isn't their an emoji for discord being discord!?Looks like Celestia's Daybreaker is whispering in her ear. Let's hope nothing bad happen because of that.
Thanks for the chapter.
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Discord will be so excited by his existence if this is true.
That marriage contract is going to have so many clauses, it will be near impossible to dissolve.
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Yeah it is going to be difficult.
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The judge presiding over the divorce of two foals: "no, you can still work this out. You haven't even had kids yet. At least go to marriage counseling and try again in 18 years."
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I was more thinking along the lines of Lyra losing a potential home or being put into foster care due to her age.
The worst part of any good story: the wait!
This is great so far and i can barely wait to see what happens next. I'm most curious as to how and how much he'll interact with Lyra
So her Cutie Mark could be useful for flying... But does she know how to? Because being a maid for her entire life to a bunch of racist and supremacists unicorns, I doubt they allowed her to exercise the main thing that represents her as a Pegasus.
Aw, Solar Flare got a pet name for Luna
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It feels more like an escape artist talent. Never bound again.
Am I understanding correctly that unfettered/the maid is despite the title a slave since they talk about her being purchased.
it said lyra was purchased too but lyra seems to understand she has no obligations while its not clear that unfettered knows she's free, for that matter is she free? She was wearing a control collar of some sort that I don't remember being removed and they seemed to be offered a stark lack of aid/counseling especially since she's been a slave her whole life.
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I plan to bring it up in CH 31. And a mention next chapter.
I realize this is almost certainly not the intent in this story, but the idea of Celestia running a society where documents signed by a kidnapper are considered legally enforceable on the victims after the fact is horrifying. I'm also a little disappointed Dawn didn't just point at the maid and demand Celestia "Fix it!" on the spot before they all left on the train. Where is that childish moral outrage when you need it.
Besides, if Lyra has a full ride scholarship maintaining school attendance shouldn't be a problem anyways.
Holy hell there is a lot going on. Whispers of Daybreaker, human Lyra trapped in equestria, and one strange colt at the centre of it all. I am fully invested in this story!
I seriously hope, despite Dawn messing with the timeline, Luna still returns reformed because she is the mentality/psyche expert and Celestia seriously needs someone to help her in that regard.
A horse named Swift Wind...
Nah, never heard of him.