Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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This chapter wasn't here last time I refreshed...
I get to keep reading!!!!
Wow, shit is... not going well for Dawn. And then the shit with the Storm King in the background... Ooof. I wanna say, "well, at least we have more then a decade until the Storm King is an issue," but given it's already coming up, I doubt that's true. Waiting also doesn't exactly help all the nations he takes over before attacking Equestria.
I wonder if Mt. Aris has been overrun, yet
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I don't think it has, IIRC Tempest led that campaign herself.
So Dawn teams up with pinkie canon husband xD this can only go well.
Buckle up dawn you about to hear a lot more O&O one liners and memes. You broth it on yourself.
I'm kinda questioning how kidnapping an alicorn (ya know a freaking godling) is a good idea in any regard. It like buying a ticking time bomb.
I'm also surprised his family yet to know and not busting canterlot gate at this point.
Maybe dawn should invest in a waypoint warp gate from canterlot to ponyville.
resting unless of course he was doing some kind of weird resistance training or something.
Man, if I was Dawn, I'd take the foalnappers. Nopony should be subjected to the song that never ends.
Also the Minotaurs, huh? I really have to wonder what goes through their heads and all that. You don't mess with the Alicorns. It's like they want to be glassed or suffering eternal night. "but only if they find out who dunnit" nah man, blind incandescent rage, and maybe even grief, doesn't care, it will hit everyone.
Looking forward to yet more.
Now you’re just spoiling us. When this chapter pace inevitably slows there’s going to be a lot of withdrawal.
Celestia should tell Dawn’s family herself. Any other messenger might not survive.
Also:
Lone. Unless he's being loaned out to somepony, but that seems even more wrong.
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Yeah he wasn’t thinking clearly. I mean he did just wake up, found himself kidnapped, and was worried his friends and family might have been taken as well.
great chapter
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Plus he a child. Yes he technically much older but his body and brain still as developed as a childs one. So it a given he reacted like this.
Plus unless he hada lot of experience being kidnapped in his previous life it won't jelp much.
Just noticed this line. Dunno how I missed it on my first read through.
Does this mean Dawn is shifting slowly into his own nightmare form?
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I would love to answer but that spoiler is too big.
It's too bad the target is currently the wrong tribe. So sad. Was almost expecting the Captain Celaeno's Avian pirates, but in come the Abyssians! Capper?
Oh geeze. Cheese Sandwich might be in for some heat. The Ultra Fast Pony parody made him into a super serious demon hunter. I don’t think some aggressive pursuers will push him that far while traveling with Dawn, but he could get a little more grilled than he was in canon if the action gets too heavy. He is rolling with his first contact with a new pony tribe really well.
Poor Twilight and Trixie. They’re going to latch onto our guy tight when he gets back. Keep helping them, Cadance.
Celestia might want to teach both of them some communication spells and maybe assign them some security soon… especially when traveling.
Yeah. That's business 101. I understood that when I was ten. Freaking amateur
Looks like somepony is stuck in fight/flight mode. Someone blast him with love quick!
Even if they teleported, they shouldn't have been that drastically far from transportation or civilization, right? Something seems weird about the kidnapping....
4 chapters in a day is crazy
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Yeah most were basically finished and some were written out of order so we’re just waiting around.
I do hope they find out about this minotaur at some point to give him burning hot Equestrian justice. Ain't no way he's getting away with this.
Oh. No fucking wonder then, huh? No one would bother trying to go after him after the first couple of times, so the insistence makes sense now.
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Can't change back, huh? Maybe it's a defensive mechanism? From herbivore to a more battle-capable form in which he subconsciously feels safer.
Or maybe he really is developing nightmare form. 🤷
Cheese sandwich should have sang this song https://youtu.be/GO397hnMi2w?feature=shared
so that how that works