Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Sounds like they're going for an aesthetic here rather than just a good spot. I have the "error" in orange as it could be considered correct if you're using it to describe a spot a goon would hang out.
Ah, so Scoots doesn't have a family in this universe. Sad for her before now, but probably better off going forward from now on.
Cute chapter. You'll eventually be able to fill a mattress with this story with all the cute fluff in it, and this isn't a bad thing. Looking forward to more, as usual.
I liked that you seem to be updating in a regular manner lately.
Okey this actually break's canon with no way of patching it up. Scoots parents were introduce in season 9 as a pegasus mare and earth pony stallion. Not sure how ya explain this unless they dead before dawn came along.
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Actually it’s an easy fix. Her birth parents were explorers. This put them in dangerous situations. Thanks to the butterfly effect of Forest Breeze saving Pear… the Timber wolves fled and overtook the territory of another creature which in turn showed up where Scoots parents were while heading back to Ponyville and killed them. Scoots was saved but sent to an orphanage.
Or something like that, I honestly never liked her ‘cannon’ parents as they were added in so late.
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Canon's break was at the start of the story, so this just being one of many changes doesn't surprise me.
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And what about her two aunt's?
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Yeah,
That’s when Celestia learned that particular brew was for changelings a powerful aphrodisiac…
Hooray Scootaloo!!
…I noticed Night Light was likely worn out and wrung dry off-screen…
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Assuming the trial herd with the main six minus one solidifies by then. 😈
Yeah the Skyrim hoarder completionist in me is like: This one belongs to me!
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So that's where the alcoholism began...
As always thanks for the new chapter
So her poor flying was caused by stunted growth due to mismanaged wings? Plausible.
Reminds me of the head tutor at Ridgewater College that brought in some apples from her apple tree and the cores were so soft that you could actually eat them. I always wondered what type of apple those were and I thought that they would be good for smashing.
Nice
POISONED I SAY POISONED jk there isn't enough to do that in a few apples
apple seeds have arsenic in them. a small amount of crushed apple seeds are enough to kill a man
So, I'm just going to come out and say it. The Scootaloo thing feels tacked on and unsubstantial. There really needed to be more forethought before just, boom, Scootaloo! Boom, Family! It is really just jarring and confusing. I was almost positive I must have missed a few chapters, or some were rewritten or something. I mean, I like this story, I like the story that inspired it, but this is one field where the latter has a clear advantage. Life Finds a Way really lets things simmer. Though there are also times when you just wanna yell, "Get on with it." When it comes to that story as well. But c'est mon vie, my friend.
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Not arsenic. Amygdalin (a cyanide of sugar). Most seeds contain same.But kind of toxic dose for humans is about 100-150 seeds. Other compounds in seeds are even less toxic, but I doubt the taste