Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Oh boy. This is a big derailment.... pretty sure the last chapter was too because flutters is gonna know about the tree.
also those poor buggos that didnt make it....
Can we get a 'George'?
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makes it more fun this way.
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maybe if Dawn names one and nopony will get it but Pinkie.
Revenge I must have Revenge
great chapters
Not a terribly low number, but.... .... Okay, yeah, that's very bad if that's the sum total remaining not stuck with Chrysalis.
I’m pretty sure these chapters were uploaded in a row, because I didn’t see them yesterday, but they were pretty good, and thanks for the warning from the previous chapter, it was easier to get into the "Horny scene in the chapter" mentality and digest it quickly, and after that it was pretty nice
So... we got Mane Six - Aj in the Harem? Whatever, Fluttershy and Flutterbat? interesting, there may be changes in the canon with this (more than is already changed, obviously) and the last chapter...
I say war, and I’m sure Luna would agree, unfortunately war does not work, fortunately we have 4 alicornios, a power-shifting queen and possibly a rainbow ray provided by the elements of harmony, Chryssy will have to have a very great wit and cunning if she thinks she could survive that
Den mother : veranda
Males : thrax, egress, edge
Females : zera, hex, Durr, Miro, fey, iyo, may, vex, Kai, xera, till.
Here are a few names to choose from
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Pm me this please, so they don’t get lost in the comments. I probably won’t pick for a week or two so need something to look back on.
Drone Jesus died for our sins.
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Isn’t there a ‘Kevin’ changeling in attendance for Cranky’s wedding in Ponyville? That’s a little out of place for the standard changeling name… Lyra could conceivably generate a human name, too.
I don’t know about naming, but I don’t often see a prankster changeling. “Hey! I do not walk like that!” “My flank does not do that!… does it?” “Oh! She totally does that thing!” Lol Since when did the Day Court get a jester?
Dawn’s going to have a busy semester… as well as a host of other ponies. Good luck, colt.
Somehow, I don’t think Celestia will appreciate, “I was making out,” as an acceptable excuse for the historical survey of the old castle… Might open an opportunity to ask about the events though?
But to learn
A typo for fixing my good sir!
I suggest that Imago prepare herself for a war.
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Thanks for the edits as always. But no war. Her own children are not even fully grown and war spoils love. Sadly they have to hold back else they become monsters themselves.
Would be interesting to see if there are other surviving changelings out there slowly making their way to Cantorlot to join the hive.
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I meant beef up defenses at least in the castle and I wasn’t implying that her changelings go to war.
I feel like a lot of changelings would either have no names or end up with silly ones due to how many of them there are. All the great names are reserved for the ruling class. Unfortunately, the show kind of ruins that little headcanon. It could be chalked up to Chrysalis quickly burning through the good names and those being the ones we see, but eh. It's a little flimsy.
I'd still be hella down for stupid names that aren't even names half the time. Like Defenestration, Kibble, Pan, and Ladle. The first word lives rent free in my head- I cannot forget about it even if I wanted to.
I would like one of them to be named shade. Not cause it's my changelings name or anything but it would be nice
There should be a shy infiltrator named Ellipses
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Sadly with her personality it takes a very special type of pony to be her lover. Cheese Sandwich is that stallion and cannon did too good a job with him unlike the other girls. Flash was a bad match for Twi, AJ and Dash got together so it’s easy to throw a stallion in the mix, Rarity never found a good match, and shy kinda has discord but… it’s discord.
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Yeah I think so, where the gods have portfolios. Good stuff.
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I like that idea?
I could offer you the use of my 'lunt Hope. Canonically she was caught, arrested, and put under Twilight's supervision. Pinkie nicknamed her Hopeling because everyone is hopeling she leads to peace between ponies and changelings.
i.ibb.co/DV5wzx8/hopedesignbg-by-kukotte-dcb46l9.jpg
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I enjoy the story it's just like I said, grinding plot to a halt for the relationship stuff just isn't my cup of joe.
I much prefer a story like diaries of a madman where the plot is somewhat interwoven with relationship stuff slightly and then when most of the main plot has been finished, go full Nascar speed towards relationships and drama building.
Although imo you need to speed up the plot just abit. Seems like you'll have dawn and all of the main relationships and character development almost completely done by the time of nightmare moon.
Although I do love me a longfic so I'm not mad your spreading out the plot.
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I dissagree, i like the rate that things are going, and relationships will get more stressors with different events, so they remain relevant. After all luna is gonna show up eventualy, and thats probably when twilight moves to ponyvile and enters the herd.
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Ahh yeah I can see what you mean and spoiler. Not all the setup relations will be perfect or even last like with a lot of the stories I have seen on here.
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Understandable, I personally just don't like the hard shift in direction before the plot really even started.
We can have differences in opinion,totally fine.
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Yea that's pretty interesting, almost every fimfic I've read the Mc usually shacks up with a horse or 2 and never breaks up or grows distant with them at all. Like they are forever stuck in the honeymoon phase.
Although il never forgive you if you don't have pinkie as a permanent member of the herd. She just never gets love outside of smut fics and even then.
Our
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I still expect more but at the same time I don't think we can expect too many as hiveless don't live long so if they didn't have anywhere to go they may have already died.
Even the ones that did make it it's implied that they may have not if they hadn't had the den mother.