Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Well I hope it works out for Celestia. As for Celestia not giving dating advice he is an alicorn pretending to be a unicorn and he at the age where girls start to make herds for the future including getting a future husband among the boys their age. But starlight really needs to get an attitude check or she will lose him.
Hmmm. I'm considered with that ending so I'm going only a medium nice
Love the chapter. Can't wait to see Celestia meet her daughter. Keep up the great work.
That totally was a doozy, Pinkie. I think it will be a good one. But now someling is going to have some well-founded suspicions of our guy.
May Alicia see a day when her disguise is more of an accessory than a necessity! …could ‘changeling’ be the reason why Flurry Heart looks the way she does?
Good job talking with Twilight, Dawn! Getting Starlight to confront some of her inner demons may be another doozy. But I think you can do it. Sunburst is another piece of that puzzle, I think.
Has Dawn been exploring his Clover the Clever earth pony magics or making any small breakthroughs recently?
Good chapter!
So Imago loved her for 50 and only worked for her for five? Did I get that right?
I thought she was a queen...?
As always thanks for the new chapter
Definitely not how I was expecting Imago to be revealed, but it works fine so it seems. That nymph getting out was a lovely little coincidence. I'm super excited to see Celestia confront Imago and meet the hive.
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She probably has had several different personas across those years to hide her immortality/long life. From the sounds of it their relationship only came about when Imago created Feather. The physical side only happening in the last few months as detailed in an earlier chapter.
It will be interesting to see Celestia & Imago’s conversation when it happens. Will Celestia recognise any of Imago’s past personas. Also we’re all of them maids or did they have different roles?
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She doesn’t like that title but technically yes.
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Who said Feather was her first disguise.
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Good catch. Yeah she had a few personas over the years but not all at the castle.
Imago is planning on making Celestia her Queen. 🙌
Naturally,a changeling's first instinct is secrecy. 😈 Good thing she was caught out with someone who also knows a thing or two about secrets.
Good save on the Rainboom. Soon enough even the broad strokes level of knowledge might just be useless, as the timeline has already deviated 17 percent from his recollection.
Well, that happened a lot earlier than I thought. Honestly figured it'd be at least a few more years of Dawn's life before Imago revealed herself.
I liked this chapter. It was very interesting how you handled Twilight’s reaction to how she appeared to Starlight with her unnecessarily dense attitude.
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That was her plan but plans are for suckers.
Dun, dun, dun! trouble is coming! Save yourself Dawn!
Roar!
Thanks again Aiwhisper for another great chapter. I have to say I didn't expect the changeling reveal to happen like this and I'm surprised with how fast things unraveled with both Dawn and Celestia finding out like this. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next chapter. Good luck writing your next instalment, and as always have fun writing.
Props be to Alicia sneaking all the way up to the private rooms without being caught. She's a natural. And apparently instinctually knows what she wants having zeroed in on Dawn.
I'm not going to question Alicia being related to Celestia. Did that with Dawn and the spell that should not be named
S*** about to go down everyone grab your popcorn it's going to be one hell of a site to watch
Oh that cliffhanger. That's criminal.
Good Luck Imago
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Seconded
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I'm pretty sure Imago isn't interested in calling herself a queen specifically because Celestia is a princess. Besides, her queen status is mostly biological. She have no subordinates.
On a technicality Celestia is a queen too, but she would never be caught with this title alive. Same as with a title of a goddess.
Oh no! Oh yes! OH HELL YES!!!
Was my entire thought process this chapter
stared
pegasus
evening
losing
fury
Did not expect the triple reveal dawn got revealed to the changeling, the changeling got knowingly revealed to dawn as a result of her nymph and celestia spying on dawn happened to discover the changeling
This is one of the flags that I dislike. As I feel it all made to bash chrysalis without any other reason apart from 'hey this character is way better then X dumpster fire'......
Neato.
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or it could be a key phrase in the future, alli says that he forgot how to share love... but he really forgot or will not be taught how to share love? and if he only grew up with hate? and if that’s not the case, then just teach him how to do it again (even if he hates it)
Although... if she ultimately denies everything and burns all her bridges, then you can’t force her to really change...
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As often as I see people misspelling losing as loosing, I gotta ask. Is there some place that inspired this mass misspelling. I feel like for a large number of years I rarely if ever saw it being misspelled, but through out the past several I must see it on average a couple times per day.
This story feeds the happy box of happy things in my head. That box is hard to keep topped up with the day to days.
So Tia had scrying on prince's room?
Also, if black form is just a phase, then.. Imago is a name right on the nose
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Auto-complete functions, etc. They weren't common before 2010.
Then people copy wrong misspelled wording.
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She can scry anywhere in the castle but only looked when she felt the burst of magic from him getting surprised.