Oh, so it was the Storm King responsible. Well then, I'm starting to think he's gonna be relevant a lot sooner than I thought.

As for colors, I thought Luna was Blue and Nightmare Teal. is that not what you had done previously? I admit I'm a bit forgetful.

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Honestly I forgot too lol. There’s only so many colors to work with and I guess it’s not a super big deal if some overlap if not in the same ‘section’.

Maybe it’s good that Dawn forgot about the special message from Luna to the Thestrals as NMM seems to have been observing the interactions. He might have to be a little subtle about it.

great short chapter

Slightly Nice. Too short see you next time

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Yeah I have a longer one almost done.

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Now that's nice to hear

The colt alicorn must be the secret less secret in the entre world

Oh goodie, ofcourse there are enough subversive elements in the city to revive the Nightmare Cult.

Random question.
Does anyone else sorta want to see a fight between Luna & Nightmare Vs The Radiance & Grimm from Hollow Knight?

I wouldn't be surprised if the result of this ends up with thestrals coming out to live in normal society thanks to Nightmare's continued harassment. Of course, that means a cult will also rise up...

So really the important thing is, would warning Celestia be worth the effort?

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I don't think it would. Celestia has been investing one thousand years on her plan with the elements.

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Yeah Dawn won’t be telling her as hell still trying to keep the big things in line with the OG timeline.

If all the alicorns have an evil inner voice (Luna has Nightmare, Celestia has Daybreaker), does that mean Dawn's evil inner voice is Pinkie?

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Not exactly.

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Actually you have an entire color wheel if you use the color code. Those squares are just a quick reference.

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Good to know.

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Pinkie has chaotic good intentions with some chaotic neutral actions
She could only be evil if she goes crazy, as in talking with flour and rocks crazy

I hate leaving comments like this as it feels demanding and/or needy, but I'm writing it to say I'm looking forward to the next chapter and I hope that your work isn't kicking your ass too much.

I did notice you started up a new short story too but it immediately went on to the hiatus status. So I have to ask, is everything alright? I admit to not reading it yet tho, as it is very short and unfinished allegedly so you might have answered it in an authors note.

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Ah thanks for looking out. Just have a bit of writers block. Got the general idea for the next few chapters but need to flesh them out so they’re not bad.

Oh, not sure if it's affecting anyone else, but this chapter doesn't appear in my feed anymore.
I can scroll all the way back to Thestrals on a Train and see it there, but searching "Dawn's New Day." using Ctrl f does not return this chapter.

So yeah, odd. Figured I'd mention it.

Can't wait to read more of what you have, when I pop on to check for chapter updates on anything Dawn's new day is the one I hope to see a new one of the most, really enjoying what you have going so far :3

Ok, I have to ask, is this Trixie from inconvenient Trixie? Because it kinda feels that way.

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Is that a different fic, if so then no. My version of Trixie is just a combination of meeting some supportive ponies early in life (Dawn and Starlight) and not having her dreams trampled on.

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https://derpibooru.org/tags/tumblr-colon-inconvenient+trixie

Not actually that close a match, but Trixie here did make me think of this Trixie.

I think it was Trixie climbing on top of dawn early on that made me think of it.

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no, wasn’t inspired by that but it’s really funny anyway.

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And another has fallen for her innocent mask! I guess you’ll find out where her “endless” amounts of “confetti” comes from. Or maybe you’ll be in the next cake.

Let the story continue. It's too good and too popular to end.

I finally, finally got around to reading this and caught up in two sittings! I’m so excited to see where this goes. Though lemme know if you ever need an editor? It’s been a bit since I’ve edited and proof-read pony fics but for a story like this, it’d be well worth the time.

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No

1. Blue Frost I Left My World for Ponies!?

Hope you're doing well

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I am thanks, just lots of work and no time to write

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Ok, just wanted to make sure. You usually post more often and you haven't so I wanted to make sure you were ok