Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Of course she knows... You adorable 4th wall breaker enigma...
Interesting celestial seems to have deeper connection to the Apple family than i thought
Love the update. Can't wait to see the reactions of his family to his ascension. Hey do you think you can have him sneak back to canterlot to deliver Celestia his present for her. Reading her inner dialogue at the start makes me feel sad for her. Also do you know when you will have him tell Twilight about his ascension? If you wait too long it would come off as not trusting.
Applejack may catch on to something being hidden. The trouble is that when she demands to know, she’ll probably be required to help keep the secret which could be even more difficult than just not knowing in the first place… but somepony is going to find out come bath time.
Looking forward to cute tiny Applebloom.
lol and Dawn doesn’t skip a beat. Pinkie knew and he rolled with it like a champ. Point to you, Dawn. Hope everypony in town had a good semester… autumn.. Dawn, if you see Fluttershy again, please don’t do that thing you did last time.
Lyra living with Bon Bon now? I suppose she hasn’t talked to Dawn yet about the marriage.
Hmm.. now that Dawn will be near a library not monitored actively by the princess (golden oaks), maybe he’ll find a lead on his mission from Luna?
I'm certain celly wouldn't mind looking after the cute nymphs! She needs to be informed about changelings so she can give them lots of cuddles!
The next arc is going to be entertaining for sure! I love me some thestral (booty)!
In all seriousness I'm eager to see how you play their culture and whatnot.
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but if he did he could see her true form, because is the magic used basically an advanced illusion, or is it like those see me not charms that are used in harry potter, where if you know what to look for then they become ineffective. Also is changeling magic, true shapeshifting or is it something else.
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I have that in the world building blog. Also keep in mind she has perfected her disguise enough to fool Celestia.
Is Balanced Dawn in any way related to Radiant Dawn?
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I feel like that isn't much of an achievement considering Chrysalis fooled the intire castle with her disguise.
Besides pretty sure changling transformation isn't illusion and an actual physical shape shifting, so it'll be hard to detect unless you the magic signature isn't changed.
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If applejack gets nosy tell that she doesn't get the right to everyone secret and he will tell when he feels the time is right and not before! Unless she believes that the secret will hurt someone she doesn't get the right to know. Nobody gets that right!
Nice.
Sidenote. Thanks to this story and another one I realized in destiny 2 that the wish dragon males give birth while the females sire them. Was interesting
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She’s young and immature and hasn’t gone through the growth of her Element yet. None of the Mane Six have, so there’s all kinds of bad decisions that they can make and learn from. This is about the time she would go through Where the Apple Lies, is it not? And noticing something being hidden might send her Honesty senses tingling without the experience to know that it’s okay to keep secrets. She’s also shown some interest in her new step-brother that may cause her to be concerned about his potential secret, and it may start from a good place. Although, having her dam around to provide guidance might speed up her growth that wasn’t there before; and she’s got two additional parents that could alter that development speed as well… but that might be me over analyzing. Could be everything goes down in a much more funny or positive direction.
Why do I get the feeling a certain little princess is going to find herself in the company of some rather important friends?
For such a chapter, you need to add some kind of music at the end. And I know which one it is.
Hand?
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I swear there are gremlins that go in a mess with my words lol. I fixed it.
So she remarries at some point?
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Nah just me confusing the two. I’ll fix.
When dawn shoves his hoof in pinkies mouth then pinkie does this..
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Wonder who the donor was that she produced a royal in the very first batch?
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