Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Adults can still have teachers. And I was only thinking she was like 100.
Oh my was not expecting a riska chapter (or indeed any chapter so soon after the last few dropped).
Enjoying the character development. Twilight is going to be even more mortified when she finds out that it is her BBBF who was distracting Cadence during their talk.
Thanks for the chapter on a good story
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My head cannon is that she just repressed, didn’t notice, or outright ignored anything going on between her brother and her foal sitter and it’s why she was so shocked about the wedding.
Well, wasn't expecting that little bit of lewdness out of nowhere. Somewhat alarming that Twilight thinks to use magic to suppress memories. Mind magic is generally considered tricky if not taboo. Using it on one's self seems like a great way to self lobotomize.
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She doesn’t even realize she’s doing it. I should maybe clarify that.
There the new wording should be a bit more clear.
O-O
Oh my~!
Poor Twi is gonna be repressing a lot of memories in the future.
I kinda hope either she or Dawn ends up undoing it further down the line, just to see her cringe from all of those embarrassing moments flooding back in.
Well, It would be a pity if all those memory spells suddenly fail, no?
FUCKING NICE. WE HIT THE 69
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Well now, that's worrisome but for a only slightly different reason. I hope she's unconsciously doing it to herself rather than some outside force. Either way, that's going to be a mess when that comes undone.
If the announcement is coming soon, I imagine the Hive will get a copy of the newspaper in short order. Might take a little longer for it to reach the Aunts in Klugetown.
5-8 years or so till NMM, right?
Is Shining a captain right now or is he still rising in the ranks?
At first, I was really startled by the tone shift of the chapter. Then I re-checked the title to see if it was a joke or filler, and saw the number. Literally groaned out loud.
wait... i was under then impression that Celestia wanted to reveal dawn as an alicorn at the galla... did i miss something somewhere? or did i get my stories mixed...
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She wanted to but mom said no so she announced her relationship with Imago instead.
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True but I did said childhood. But fair enough I guess.
..... Well first lemon part of the story, and twilight get a jump scare of her life. At least she didn't see her brother doing this.....
And sweetie is here!!!! now we wait for scoots
Careful Twilight, you might accidentally repress something you probably shouldn't... 😈
a little discordant the scene raised tone, but I do not complain because it was something fun, the scenes of only sex are usually somewhat boring but this is out of the rules jajajajajajaj
great chapter
In the future all Discord needs to do is hit that mental dam with a wrecking ball to win against Twilight....
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Who says he won’t?
Nice.
Not over the top it felt natural In the story just NOT straight up NSFW Good job keep it up can't wait for the next one
I love this beginning and Twilight pretending to be oblivious is great... Would have been funnier if she DID see him and that was part of the memory repression.
Nooo bad Cadence no traumatizing your future sister in law! I can already see the horror on her face what she finds out it was her brother just 2 feet feer from her while talking about Dawn!
Good grief, I forgot this story was rated M. Jumped into the first couple of paragraphs and had to double check the story's rating, hah. Sex scene jumpscare.
I really hope somepony notices that Twilight is accidentally altering her memories to suppress things she doesn't like, that doesn't sound so good.
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Yeah kept getting asked earlier on about the tags so just had to keep saying “wait for it.”
Cadence quite helpful even what was happening in the bedroom
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What? Oh, if you’re talking about why he had not become an alicorn when he first used the spell it’s because it took more than just the spell for him to change.
Well that required a double take and a half from me on the first two paragraphs… I even had to readjust my reading glasses to confirm that I was reading correctly! xD
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Elaborate.
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I thought I did in the story but sure. Aside from the spell he also had to complete some friendship quests ‘every time his mark glowed’ as well as preform the spell in front of another powerful pony to provide some extra magic. There were some other subtle things but it’s in the story... In the OG Twilight’s extra magic came from her friends and the elements.
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Who sent him on those quests? The sentient hunk of quartz aka the Cutie Map does not yet exist.
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It wasn’t a given quest. It was something he did without realizing it. He took care of issues Twilight would have originally. He mad sure ‘our town’ woud never be created, mad sure Trixie didn’t fall, and a few other things.
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One thing I'd like to commend you for is that OC protag's actions of 'messing' with canon characters majorly actually having an impact on the events.
As for alicornization... Still uncertain on how I feel about it, as it came out of the woodwork. But I must say, I do not envy this poor colt when they reveal that he's an alicorn, seeing how apparently scheming nobles do exist in this universe.
After all, who wouldn't want a bit of alicorn in their bloodline... And love potions and poison do exist... As well as other methods, I recon.
Gotta say that opening threw me for a loop, but it was a fun ride all the same XD
Cant wait for more shenanigans
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It certainly threw Armor off
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I think every adult pony got off