Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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The more people that know, the shorter the secret will last. Celestia has to know that.
Great chapter as usual 😄
Pretty good picture of him. Celestia won't admit it she just wanted him to be back a lot sooner for they can spend time together
Well Celestia get ready to be pranked at some point
Nice lore about soulmate song, but man cadence has a dark future for herself. Unless shining finds some immortality juice.
Poor chrysalis her plan doomed by the world itself. Thou would it me more beneficial for her to go after the princess of changling food?
Pretty unhappy with Celestia here. Not only did she ruin a holiday for him, but she basically forced him to reveal his secret that he wasn't ready to reveal. That's really selfish Sunbutt. I wonder if Dawn will have a soulmate song with a gaggle of fillies. The story really feels geared for Dawn to have a herd and it seems strange to bring up soulmate songs if it wasn't going to be relevant.
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It was more to explain why Cadence and Shining or the future Cakes don’t have a herd in this AU even though it’s an RGRE though I may use it later.
Soo... If the genders are reversed there, in our terms he's the first supergirl?
I hope she's plotting to ship her daughter with Dawn. Cause I have the FBI on speedily!!
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BTW cool Dawn picture
Question about the whole tethered for life thing. Since Cadance is immortal when Shining dies in like a hundred years or so will she become untethered so to be able to pursue a new mate? or is she stuck never loving again? I need this answered because the idea of a single person being your perfect match like a soulmate bothers me especially when the relationship is between immortal and mortal or if your soulmate just died oneday from an accident or sickness because what happens then.
I know a lot of people are freaked out by or hate ai but I like that. It gives those of us who do things on the side an option for art/showing what a character looks like aside from just describing them once or twice
Nice artwork!!
Yeah, Celestia, you dun glubbed up. Hopefully it’s minimal though. But your changeling found out… Dawn’s right. You’re bad with secrets. And you could have told Cadance without him being there. Hopefully Shining won’t be spying on them now… or maybe…
I get the plot device though. And some pranks are definitely due for this, princess.
Hard to say without his input yet about such things. I think Lyra, Trixie, Applejack, and Fluttershy. Maybe Unfettered or Rarity. But to outright reject Twilight? And what about joint parenting Spike? What are her thoughts? Cadance did say the mare pursues… What a semester awaits our guy!
Dawn, go to sleep or the library. Did you forget about your task?
Noice bye picture btw really bringing him to life :) good chap lad
Sick af art
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So with it being ‘for life’ if one partner dies they can find love again it just probably won’t be with another song. The Soulmate song doesn’t actually force the ponies to stay together it’s just a signifier that they are so compatible that they wouldn’t have a reason to break up on their own and are more suited to remain monogamous (a rarity in equine society). It’s similar to how ponies don’t have to follow their cutie marks but shows them a path with their best talent.
Nice
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Well that somewhat reassuring, thou if their old soul mate get reincarnated does the song heard again? That is if reincarnation a thing here?
Centuries down the line I see Dawn forming a herd of all the princess since taking mortal lover will be hard.
Just made me think of this.
Oooh interesting world building. I wonder if Dawn is gonna fall for Twilight despite his best efforts? Or if he's going to reveal that he knows a potential future and is afraid of messing it up.
Also that picture is great!
The AI generated image isn't fully accurate, but it helps a lot with visualizing Dawn regardless.
HA called it with the changeling's! May the chanterlot hive be the greatest ever known!
Gave the cutie mark a shot. Couldn't find the description.
i.ibb.co/CQn124J/Dawn.jpg
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Oh that will be perfect.
Is his cutie mark supposed to include the element of magic/twilight's star?
Weird how he never questioned it
And how no one else questioned it
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Stars are quite common for unicorns and it’s not an exact copy of Twilight’s star that was just the best we could get his cutie mark in image form. Don’t take it as exactly cannon but an example.
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I always thought it was the exact same, as I think it was the only example you have given.
When I get home I gonna replace it with one of Twilight's white starts and make the gear black. I think that would look better.
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So the exact design I had in my head was that the star was Moon silver , the black was all a dark blue making it look like the night sky, the gear was a golden sun yellow with flares coming off some of the gear teeth in red, and the white portion was a lighter blue with white tufts(like clouds) making it look like the daytime.
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So, I came up with his as the cutie mark:
i.ibb.co/h7VjPGX/DawnCM.png
I added it to the current version of Dawn:
i.ibb.co/J7nrKfF/Dawn.jpg
There are a few things I have seen in the image that made me cringe, (his right back leg, and his neck), so if I have the time I may try to clean up the base image too.
Keep up the good work.
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Omg that’s amazing. I saved it and will update it soon.
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Did a final edit. Dawn now got his hopefully future Brother-in-Law's jaw, amongst other things.
Background is by EStories on DeviantArt.
i.ibb.co/kMwCLH2/Dawn-Edited.jpg
Gotta go sleep now, I have to get up in 7 hours for work
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For this bashing I did more research into pony anatomy than I care to admit. Stallions have generaly more angular faces, while mares have more rounded shapes.
The main msytery is what seems to be the hoofs on the stalions, like Shining. Blueblood or Big Mac. Not all stallions have them, and there are examples for and against in both Earth ponies and Unicorns. It is probably not a hard hooof, So, I think it is made of different colored fur.
Stallion Hoofs are their beards. Change my mind.
This amuses me quite so.
Soon enough he'll realize the precious canon is all but destroyed, and be happier not trying to hold the world to his expectations....
Oh no dudes gonna get cradle robbed. Oof
Didn't Celestia ask for Cadence to check on Lyra and Dawn, and ask about what happened when they were kidnapped?
ALL HAIL THE PRINCESS OF FOOD
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What AI generator did you use? the picture looks so good. I was thinking of recommending it to another author -LiveFreeOrdie as the color of Dawn looks exactly the same as Cure Wave another pony but with a green main. As his story does not have a cover art and I think that's a shame.
Love the picture you generated of Dawn
Finally! A picture for me to know what our mc look like! Thank you