Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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who did she choose?
Misspelled lawyer with layer a few times. I can also say that I very much despise this development. Not a fan of very obvious villains slipping through the cracks of an ineffectual justice system.
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Cliffhanger. Bum bum bum.
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Yeah but it makes for a compelling story. Also I’m very much more of a karma believer so they will get theirs Fixed the spelling, thanks.
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Oh I'm sure, I just don't want any of them to get free and cause more problems for for their sins catch up to them.
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Ty fixed
Aaa the old mother plea of 'being forced' to do something by the husband and the child being brainwashed. Classic thou I feel it shouldn't work so well here since in RGRE mare are equated to man and male's given significantly less leniency then females on general.
Also surprised Dawn parents aren't their as witness.
Interesting.
Instead of dulling out justice? Never. I think you meant [doling] possibly.
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That's.....
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A difficult question since it can be argued that no since that experience but daen is technically 2 beings meshed into one so maybe?? well their also human dawn dad.
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I don't think they expected to get cuffed at all so shrug
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She mostly a run away rebel daughter of one of the queen's most likely chrysalis descendant.
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Agreed they would be key witnesses
I agree. Morning Dew might be able to break the coercion plea if she were to be witness, but the herd might try to turn it on Dew and blame her as an accessory if she were there. “She’s been acquitted, so try to blame Onyx and Dew for everything you can anyway.” The mastermind who refused to use any documents and used long distance word of mouth to coordinate with him. Just to put doubt in the judicial process. They seem like they’re the types to try that.
There's no way this wouldn't have devolved into a 'he said-she said' argument, sinking both of their boats.
This is just the Prisoners' Dilemma in the real world, and one of them is betraying the others well before they've made their final choice.
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No. Not an inheritance. I mean that since they committed a heinous crime against both the citizens
(foalnapping, murder, etc.) and ruler(she was hit with a spell which should count as assault) of Equestria, all of their stuff, land, titles and money is taken away by the crown as 'assets'. Since Dawn's family is both the only other members AND the aggrieved party, it'd be logical to transfer ownership of those assets to them.
That's what I meant.
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What makes you think this is RGR?
This story is based upon LFAW and neither this one or that one are RGR.
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Oh it’s RGR just not in your face about it so far due to Dawns mindset and most of the stallions shown have been outliers.
Very curious how this'll go.
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I meant Cadance and Shining THINKS they're on the spectrum. Not that they necessarily ARE.
this def scratches my Life Finds A Way itch!
Dear author who's basement have you been locked into and forced to wright in? Just ask for help and I'm sure we can find a way!
In all seriousness this IS a crazy amount of wrighting and while it is awesome don't forget to take care of yourself. Heavens above you give yourself burn out!
Still it's good to see more of your work even if I have to wait for it...just don't disappear for 2 year's without saying something...please
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Thanks for the concern but this was actually something I was working on the overview of for a while. I’m just putting the final product together as I post which is why it’s a mess sometimes. I also have lots of free time lately thanks to my job.
Thank you for the concern though.
Thanks for the update!
Nice
Though I kinda wish they'd add a Herd tag or something for people not interested in that. Just personal preference though.
Edit: Yeah there's herds, RGRE, the works. I really wish they'd add tags so readers could avoid it. :(
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An Rgre and herd tags would be a good idea. Well thanks for trying out the story.
Dealing*?
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Word could also be doling
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So in this instance I actually did use that word on purpose since Daybreaker finds the whole thing extremely boring/dull. did add a bit to make it clear though.