Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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I thought the collar was merely banished to the shadow realm place to be destroyed later?
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It was, Shining doesn’t know that though
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Interesting. Candy has ‘love vision.’ And they nullified the herding without Lyra or Dawn’s input. Probably for polo appearances -can’t have black marks like that in the legal system.
I like that Unfettered is going to school. She gets to have some normalcy and social interactions beyond the family.
Lyra look pretty disappointed she was no longer a part of the herd. I think Dawn will also have a big part of raising Spike
Love the interaction but i got a question ⁉️
How old are lyra and bon bon? I thought lyra around dawn age but bon bon seem to be post smile and already a shop owner. Which give some creepy implications.
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looks like it’s time… for another side chapter! After one more main chapter.
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The annulment was needed, even if it seems Lyra didn't outright object to the notion of it
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Her family disposed of her, she is pretty much in deep trauma
How Illegal or immoral is this in verse? Like using it for slavery yes, but I can see it being used to detain criminals or warlords/warlocks. Does it also meant heir a resigual magic traices left by the maker?
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Highly illegal the most controlling items are null blockers for unicorns and those are supposed to be regulated. Criminals are dealt with using stationary prisons only or live guards. Even making harmless magic items requires a license to sell them.
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I suppose to get the license a test of magic signature is required. Thou what about non-pony's artificer and nomadic travelers?
Also what defines a magic item?
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That all gets a bit murky with all the small towns and the level Equestria is at so things get overlooked if it’s not harmful. I haven’t put to much thought into the mechanics yet as I haven’t needed them.
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Fair I suppose.
What about something made of cold iron. Tehcnicaly no magic involved, maybe in it making but by itself it not magical. Anything made from cold iron will have anti magic property and it somewhat poisonous or detrimental to high magic beings.
Thanks for the update!
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Oh agreed.
It just is not appropriate in the circumstances let alone age. As said, it needed to be annulled
Shining’s eyes hardened. “Aside from her captors I plan to send a squad to hut down whoever made her collar. It’s unfortunate it was already destroyed
Is it? Last I heard it got turned into Bling and banished to the shadow realm
So she hit him 2 time. Isn't this a RGRE verse fic? This is the equivalent of a man hitting his girlfriend/fiance, now I'm usually for gender equality but this seem to use normal comical Interaction (female hitting male) where it should be reversed. This is a minor nit pic all things considered.
Or is that it more medieval/pre modern time thing?
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So yes it’s an RGRE but I treat Cadence and Shining as reversed (again) gender roles since he is in the guard and she is the Princess of love. Like how he has pink magic that is seen as the stronger color (think Pinkie) while Candy has blue magic. they also shared a soulmate song so do not herd.
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So essentially a femboy cadence and tomgirl shining. Suppose that answers that, but wasn't cadence aura already blue to begin with?
I suppose theirs no backlash because cadence is a goddess and royalty so it ok for her.
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Yeah I didn’t need to change their magic aura from cannon so, easy to work with it as another reason.
So to Cadance and Shining, Dawn and Twilight are on the spectrum?
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Which spectrum we talking, because Twilight has always had OCD issues. But no. None of them have human style mental health issues. any personality quirks are the result of their excessive mana pools and/or in Dawns case his dual sets of memories.
Without. Single word in this case.
Again, I don't understand your choice behind using the same concept as Life finds a way.
Dawn behavior is 100% pony. There is nothing about him separated him from a normal pony. Even his "maturity" is extremely limited. He acts like a child, thinks like a child, behaves like a child. He's only a bit more emotionally mature that the rest, and not by much.
I really enjoy the story and I feel bad for saying this but at this point it feels like you try to ride "life finds a way" fame for quick growth. As any elements you've used from that story are extremely superficial and don't add nothing to your own story.
You're story by itself is rather good. I don't see why you did that at all. Specially because your world building is amazing.
Accidental ace up the sleeve, eh?
Ohh, so she has that ability in this fic, awesome!
Honestly, true. I feel like even for someone with an adult mind, going through all of that would still be traumatic. Hell, add to that the fact that he's still got a foal brain and it gets even more confusing up in there