Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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This made me think, “Lots of the party ponies are earth ponies but not all. There’s nothing to worry about with Pinkie, because her soul is good. … but what if there was an evil party pony? A Sombra-level Cheese Sandwich…” Malevolent motives to entice others into horrible fun… like that turning the pony into gold thing but making it into a sick game. Shut up, Foster. Stop being negative.
Is that formerly gilded pony okay? I’m sure she has quite a story.
That collar detail could be important.
Dawn’s right about Big Mac, though. Might as well, bud. You’ve got a big farm. Needs lots of hooves.
I bet Bloom’s saddle bags were nearly touching the ground because of her tiny legs and the bottles were as tall as she. Oo~h the cute!!
Dang, Homes! Fluttershy was stoked for that date. Kids don’t know nothing. Ammirite? Don’t give up, Fluttershy.
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I actually just read a fic recently with a Pegasus named Suprise that was a cousin of Pinkie’s in the Wonderbolts.
Poor Fluttershy, Dawn got her hopes sky high.
What you did with pinkys thoughts I think is cool along with, I have a personal head Canon that dawn can sometimes hear her thoughts.
Nice
This was pleasing.
Huh, I normally don’t ship characters together like ever but I could see Dawn and Flutters being a thing in the future.
What a lovely chapter to finish my day on. I wonder if Dawn and Fluttershy will end up together.
It's a party in the USA
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I think this going into the 'herd' route.
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Eventually, not rushing it though./spoiler]
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You mean in his herd?
Remind me how many mare in dawn herd again?
AA one of the corner stones of MLP, a good and wholesome slice of life with a big dash of adorable and cute stuff
So, I'll be honest here. I like the story and the characterizations and such. There is just one thing that bugs me, just one. The timeline for the foals makes zero sense. I don't mean them being in Ponyville or having jobs or whatever. I mean, it seems like foals age at a ludicrous speed. I mean, Dawn and Lyra are like 8-9 and they are old enough to breed? I mean, that sits dangerously close to Foalcon. (whether it happened or not, it was both implied and, to a lesser extent, normalized. Don't get me wrong, a thousand years ago, we did it too, but I don't see Equestria as that depraved.) I mean, if it had been established in context that human years and pony years were different, that would be one thing. I've read this far, and if there was even a passing comment, it was uninformative. I mean, with these ages in mind, how old do you think the cast is at the start of the show? I've seen people say anywhere from late teens to young adults, but at your pace, they'll be like 10 when it all goes down, and that seems a little....odd. I am not passing judgment. Your story, your rules. I just wish those rules were a tad more clear is all.
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So technically, humans can have children as young as 9 and probably did when our life spans were only about 40 years well before modern civilizations. Horses can breed as young as 3 so… there is that. Also Lyra and Dawn’s thing was more of an arrangement, they wouldn’t actually have offspring until older if it had gone that way. As for nightmare, she won’t show up for about eleven years still, so our crew will be 19 or older when she does. I thought I did establish the timeline in the first few chapters but I may mention it in more detail as it was just in passing.
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Currently we don't really know since the Author could still throw a curveball.
The ones we Can be damn sure of are Starlight and twilight.
This is officially my new Head-Canon.
Poor flutters, she didn't understand the assignment...
HOW MANY PONIES IS DAWN GOING TO ONE DAY ADD TO HIS HERD! Literally it feels like this is one of those anime situations where everyone wants to date the protagonist. List of potential herd mates: Starlight, Lyra(she may already be in the herd), Twilight, Fluttershy, Pinkie, maybe even AppleJack if they decide to do the sort of Step-sister herd mate or Bon Bon if Lyra still connects with her in the future. He hasn't really connected with Rarity or Rainbow yet, although he's had 2-3 brief conversations with Rainbow. Maybe a good amount of these will be friend-zoned, but you never know.
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What ? You're reading too far into it this early in the story, right now it's maybe twilight (might not be because of moondancer),Lyra (maybe, once again it's not stated if she'll shag up bon bon like canon). Really only 2 for now. Technically we have hints of Trixie but at this point it's too early.
Apple jack is firmly stated to be a sister for now so like you said unless step sister shenanigans happens she's not apart of the herd. Flutters and pinkie have gotten next to no screen time so nothing there, your reaching for now. Finally starlight is considered a friend of dawn and unless otherwise stated is gonna go the Canon route of chasing after Trixie and/or sunburst.
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Yo creo que también con moondancer
Wait, is Fluttershy living by herself? She is still a kid, a young one at that. Or is she older in this AU?