Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Ug typo
Buckle up and soldier down, Rarity. You can do it!
Methinks somepony will get her on the dance floor anyway. A great time for some more adorkable moments.
Way to go, Big Mac! Ponyville is definitely in need of a quick reaction response team apart from the random secret service undercover agent. I don’t know how you’ll establish the Equestrian military ranking system, but I can see SGT Big having a little swagger in his dress uniform if he ends up serving.
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Nah Mac won’t join full time since he’s all about the farm life and family. Maybe a local reservist…
I think here the phrase is literal. You and a bull on a ring duking it out
As always thanks for this and all the previous chapters
i dont get that...
What’s Rarity doing going after a colt 2/3 her age? Are colts really That rare? Also, Pinkie isn’t the same age as Shy. Flutters is canonically one year older.
Pinkies internal dialogue never fails to entertain.
Overall good chapter. Thank you.
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It was a typo I fixed.
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Yes, colts are that rare at about a 1 to 6 ratio. Also it’s only a 5 year age gap between Rarity and Dawn so not that strange especially since Rarity only got her cutie mark recently which is a big factor in maturity in pony society.
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Yep, it’s typically two bulls wrestling to show off for the cows during rodeo seasons.
“Thanks, it’s never easy loosing a friend.” Losing. Man, this is such a common mistake for so many on here. Worst part is that it doesn't come up on spell check. Cuz yeah, unless Starlight was being launched as a projectile, "loosing" is incorrect 10 times out of 10.
“I didn’t like loosing to Shining Armor." Again same thing here. he wasn't launching anything at Shining.
Anyway, it's nice to see that big mac is training himself, the Everfree is very close and it's a good idea to be ready for it. Also considering how Ponyville fares over the years, I'm surprised most of the town isn't at least a somewhat competent fighting force.
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Mature colts are rare I'd imagine. Dawn has a good head on his shoulders too, and again, colts can just say no. If Dawn is interested in it, it's fine. I'm also pretty sure Rarity wouldn't mind waiting either, and the longer she waits, the less the age gap seemingly becomes.
One thing about their ages to note is that Fluttershy is canonically one year older than Pinkie Pie.
Author...you need more training with personality I'm the characters with relationships. Good thing I know a good comedian to help on psychology on relationships in a nutshell he talks about who and what women are lol just think he was a mare and the woman are stallions.
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Guess I could change it. It really won’t hurt anything.
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is confused.
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No worries. Just tryin to help *Pat pat*
Celestia: "alright, so here's how to make a typical appearance and not make instant enemies by simply standing around...."
Fun that Dawn is seeking an interest in human history in Equestria. Will Lyra be a help or hindrance in that passing curiosity?
Nice
Is it possible to get a scene of Dawn having a guys night? Maybe Shining and Big Mac play some O&O with him.
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I actually have one planed for when he is home in the fall and them having some bro time.
Big Mac being a noble and yet being in the militia as opposed to the main armed forces would I think automatically give him a very high rank in that 'branch' if ever mobilized. Definitely be in command of a sizeable group.
Eeee another epic chapter.
Rarity just wants him because he's a stallion. Fluttershy and Rainbow already care about him to some extent