Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Nice
blood
Thanks for the chapter!
Oh Chrysalis... Why they denied you your redemption arc?
Or I'm being "Hot Crazy Scale" biased?
Well... at least many fans give her her happy ending
Bug Wife ending: "mha hart mah sole"
As always thanks for the new chapter
Nope. Dawn, that there’s a full blown Royal conspiracy and borderline scandal.
This could be an eventful evening.
How’s the school students doing? Starlight, Sunburst, Trixie, Moondancer, Lyra? Probably just sitting around studying but maybe not? Rarity’s gonna want all the details from Applejack next day.
I'm hoping that Dawn Twilight dance together
Farm work not far work.
Also great chapter
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Ty as always. It should be ‘eye’ though as he only opened the one :)
Instead of batshit insane she became just plain old boring insane.
Looking forward to when this is finished so I can read it. I love Life Finds A Way and Im currently reading that one, and at 1.2 million words it should take me a fair while yet.
I still wait with baited breath to see the fruition of thine yonder mind come to light. Good day and fair writings to you friend.
Gigachad_Mac bringing his A+ game. Keep it up Mac and you'll be surrounded by mares and a lot of foals.
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I feel Hasbro had writting themselves into a corner with her. They wanted her to be a villainess longer(which I agree with) but later dropped the ball with the og changling reform.
Doesn't help that many of the fandom Lough her because she the closest antagonist to break the M6 bond without some hax ability (looking at you discord).
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That be either a wholesome dance with will lead to love or a disaster that get them banned from the gala
i enjoyed this chaper.
looks like you missed a few typos:
Aleo Aloe
The mare giggled and began chanting with her coworkers chatting
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Nah, Celestia would never ban somepony from the gala if they had ever once livened the dull thing up for her.
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Cough cough Nobles cough
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Tbf i think it's Celestia's celebration so she gets final say.
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I said livened it up, not made it duller.
It’s Celestia’s castle, Celestia’s party. Any noble that dares tell her who she isn’t allowed to invite would find themselves swiftly epona non grata in all their former social circles as the scuttlebutt of Celestial Displeasure spread.
Heh, nipped that in the bud. But that would explain why the Apple family wasn't in the catering conglomeration later on.
The bugs may be content for the moment, but will it stay that way when emotional turbulence is raised?
This made the day 20% cooler
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I actually have a nice chapter planned for the changeling situation as a whole.
finally caught up all great chapters so far
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Ty.
Nice story but lately it's plot had been grinding to a halt every since the puberty chapter and it's been mostly relation ships stuff,hinting about lemon and limes with extremely little plot progression or something actually interesting happening. Honestly might just start skipping chapters or this story entirely since it now feels like a highschool au.
Seems like the author got to the school plot point but got stuck writing about it and liked the whole "highschool au" type fic style and never got around to doing major time skips which shoulda happend like 10-20 chapters ago imo.
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yeah sorry if you’re not into the slower relationship and character building chapters instead of the main arks. They will pick back up again though and this story overall is not going to be short.
I just realized if Imago and Celestia stay together she'll have a literal hive worth of children eventually. Despite not being a changeling, she'll be the mother/sire to the entire hive of changelings.
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Mother would be appropriate as only Alicia is her biological daughter.