Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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good story, hope you don't cancel it or anything like that. I actually hope you can produce like...dozens of chapters within the following days because Im eager to read more :)
hmmm... Thats suspicious. There no records of his sire, while having moms for a pegasus and a unicorn, even a powerful one. Really suspicious. 🤔
Balanced Dawn being unicorn has ley lines of pegasus. Maybe Morning Dew used a spell to gender-change/give fully working equipment to Forest Breeze? 😏
That is interesting about his sire. Dawn mentioned once about the story his mothers told him. I think it was in connection to his pegasus leylines.
Yes, you will, Celestia! Moar shenanigans will ensue.
I~nteresting… Celestia may be a part of the Apple clan officially? Almost sounds like Sunset is her biological foal… makes me wonder who the sire could be…
I really like how all this is shaping up. It’s interesting and compelling, and I’ve no idea how it’ll end up! Very fun.
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I honestly don’t have his mark meaning down 100%. they are often up to interpretation of the pony anyway and how they use it, I do hope to eventually add some art of it though with all the positive comments so far .
Thanks for the updates!
I like stories like this. Looking forward for more chapters! Definitely going to keep an eye on this :D
great ch a little sad but a happy ch none the less ty
The mystery of the magical prodigy’s missing sire is ahoof, Trotson! Is he a Wonderbolt? Is he a time traveling alicorn who lives in a deceptively tiny blue box?
Or does his dam know an ancient and secret—perhaps even highly banned due to the potential for unpleasant side effects if not cast perfectly—short-term gender-swapping spell that she cast on her unusually powerful pegasus ninja waifu for a night of celebratory procreative pony recreation?
So Sunset Shimmer might actually Celestia's daughter neat
And Sunset is confirmed Celestias daughter here. Excellent, can't wait to see this play out. Hope this Celestia will actually own up to her portion of the argument this time.
Very interesting implication.
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Easy guess is she had a member of the apple family be her temporary consort.