Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Caught a typo.
The story is taking an interesting direction. I'm looking forward to the butterfly effects Dawn's family moving will cause.
Guess he'll be Balanced Apple from now on.
Thanks for another nice chapter.
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Ty as always Star.
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nah his name will stay the same with how names work in Equestria
This chapter was worth the wait it has some good prize at the end
Oh wow! Lyra’s here!? Did she follow Dawn or did she run away from Canterlot or is there some other reason? Dawn should invite her to the party. Bon Bon is setting up shop already? How much older is she than Lyra?
I really like that little detail about Applejack’s cutie mark.
I’m glad Pear was able to find some support so quickly. Looks like Dawn’s going to have some physical vacations and bulk up some to help his new family. Look out, Shining. This might give Rainbow a weather mentor; meh. Who’m I kidding? She’ll still be resting on clouds most of the time.
Young Derpy!! I hope we’ll get to see young Rarity soon!
This is one of the better human turned pony in Equestria stories I've read.
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Thanks for proofreading all that and hopefully you enjoyed the chapter. Didn’t change a few things since the capitalization during dialogue was mostly for emphasis of the word but some wasn’t supposed to be there so I missed it.
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Agree
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All good, I'm happy to help. Ah, sorry, I haven't seen that form of emphasis before. Usually, I see italics being used but I suppose here you can't since that is already being used for internal dialogue.
It's because you're going to be plowing both of them!
Just kidding. Probably acting as clarification or a go between or something.
Ok them this time line is officially off course with it's own destination in mind.
And breezy comment joking about AJ taking advantage of Dawn has even less weight.
Congrats Dawn you now have 3 new siblings!
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Well not exactly, when it comes to herding, dating your non bio ‘sibling’ to “keep it in the family “ isn’t frowned upon.
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Yea, fuck
I've tried to imagine this, yet failed.
You and definitely as usual. :)
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Get*
Damn, already moving on, ey pear? Doesn't sound like you had much love for your husband.
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She did, ponies just handle grief differently than humans as a herd species. They’re no strangers to death but it’s also not brought up in polite company. Pear was also looking for more herd mates with her husband so she thinks it’s what he would want.
Also con: that means they're more accessible to the evil Canterlot guys...
...alright
I knew this would happen when you killed of bright mac, my question is why? Why even do that? It just seems too convenient
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Well bright Mac and Pear Butter originally die so saving one felt like a compromise of the family still feeling a loss but not both parents. I didn't save Bright Mac because it could have easily resulted in more foals, if he was the one to marry Dawn's moms.
So, Dawn will have a Unicorn, Pegasus, and Earth Pony mom. How very well balanced.
Also, I suppose his Canterlot relatived are going to be even MORE put-out by having a "Mud Pony" in the family.
Yknow I was thinking it meant he was going to be good with Maglite he, basically combining human ingenuity with machine and smash it together with magic to make something better than either half.