Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Lovin' it so far keep up
Nice
Dawn: yeah. You know, she’s smarter than she looks.
: I… uh~ huh. I really want to disagree, bu~t…
Wow, Mr Cake! Soulmate Song on your first date. I don’t think Cadance can make that brag. And she’s the alicorn of love.
I mean, you might want to get a little involved. But do be careful.
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First date but they had been flirting every time he makes a delivery to her shop even before Pinkie showed up.
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Yeah she seems like the most emotionally mature of the group next to dawn who is not understanding what the girls are so worked up about. He likes them as Friends and he not sure about more but he was willing to consider it.
I have but one word to say here and that is "Cute". Seriously this is adorable. Well done writing it. Cute scenes are hard to pull off well.
So it begins...
Aiwhisper-san are you going to write an actual Soulmate Song when Dawn's time comes? It's quite obvious it's going to be the mythical Soulmate Herd Song
great chapter
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I will admit I would love too but even If I did I couldn’t include it until the herd was complete. There may also be some non ponies joining later on so wouldn’t want to over complicate that.
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Well, I really his future herd has more then just ponies/equines in it.
Nice
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NON PONIES TOO!!?
Imago's Daughter (the princess)? Ember?
It would be REALLY hard but... Chrysalis? She's so hot but soo canonically evil...
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No Chrissy, she’s going to remain insane and evil for this AU.
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Sad... What a waste of hotness...
Anyways add a powerful full of magic and LOVE male alicorn on her sight and I'm pretty sure Shining Armor is not going to be the target in her evil plans
Hell it could be escalated as a obsessing yandere-like one-sided love... Extra points if she can also eat that type of love
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Well dang that idea might have just changed my mind lol.
BTW the Soulmate Herd Song could manifest when the very last member joins...
Can't find anything wrong with this chapter and I also can't wait to spike says his first words
Chrysalis's name should be capitalized.
Also, called it :p If there is an anomaly, it must be an alien
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Why, just why. I hope she at least be more tactical or strategical in her deranged path.
Well little sunshine brat how about you be born in pre unification Equestria and with the fanon xenophobic pony's, see how you do and be.Sorry if I'm seem to flame but this is really a sour point.
On another hand Dawn dealing with the consiquence of having two souls merge and alien memory's, wonder what he do to overcome this hurdle.
The apple mom's seem to be getting along so well, thou will another stallion join?
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so non pony will also be part of the herd, interesting I hope one be a hippogriff! Seriously they don't get much love.
Are*
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Oooh does that mean Gilda is on the table? ...i might be getting the Amazonian fanon mixed in with my thoughts a little bit too much. ( Along with my enjoyment of catbirb rear :p)
Also just had a thought. What if luna and NMM were two separate ponies that fused when they ascended, same with celestia and daybreaker, and Dawn got around this limitation because of the imprint.... Wait no that kinda falls apart when you consider twiggles and cadence that kinda falls apart.... Unless you go with the fanon that shes the reincarnation of the ruler of the crystal empire, then you can wave it off as the elements learning from their mistake and not needing two ponies to make an alicorn.
Then again you can have celly and lulu be catalysts for twilight and dawn so they don't need the second component....
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Honestly never considered Gilda.
my big reveal.
Wait so she was planning on just showing Celestia right off the bat? I mean it's better then waiting year's down the line but still vary risky. Best of luck to her anyway
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Yeah Imago was thinking about it since things had been going so well then regained her senses before she could make a mistake.
🤷 Your guess is as good as mine. next to her colt friend's house.
And this is where Starlight begins her control freak tendencies. 😈
So it begins. The Rizz is strong with this one...