Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Hope that Dawn finds a way to reverse the gold spell if Dawn other family members to die is it possible their magic cold spell would suddenly stop working and probably reverse everything that they turned into gold
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sadly the other victims don’t last long without oxygen unless another spell is used and maintained for when they want live ones.
Thanks for the update!
Well that sucks. Surrounded by evil. But at least he didn't kill the filly. Hopefully it will get reversed before long. I can't wait till the hammer comes down on this family. I hope they all get capital punishment for the murder of so many ponies.
I’m glad his victim survived… at least for now. But he doesn’t know that.
I’m excited for the Dawn’s Great Escape.
And NMM… that was cryptic. Could it be Dawn will help align the stars to aid her escape? Or will she enlist him for the big Event?
No offense but this kidnapped arc can't end any quicker... Can't wait to get back to the slice of life magic school arc!
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I get the feeling Dawn is going to be breaking quite a few rules when it comes to magic. What with living statues he can make. Makes me wonder if he will be able to use what he did or if he will even get the chance to
NGL you really made we want to drop kick Dawn's grand parents and the others into Tartarus so they be hunted and devoured constantly for all eternaty.
Because serious they just asking for Celestia to go Daybreak and show them their own tyranny.
I hope Lyra and Dawn get to share their origin at one point.
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I doubt the greedy family members would willing allow such a thing to happen. I think first they will have to be locked up then Celestia mages will have to study the spell to see if it can be undone.
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Sounds more like what the Cockatrice does, only with gold instead of stone.
What Dawn's doing might actually be what the spell is intended to do. I.e. an imprisonment/stasis spell.
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That would be an interesting twist. ESPECIALLY if the whole sterility issue is because of a failsafe built into the spell instead of a curse.
Well yeah, she can hold his mind hostage with nightmares and he didn't expect to be extorted like that, huh?
Hmm i forget, are there gonna be snu snu scenes in this story or is it just rated M for how dark it is and the occasional genital reference?
Can't wait for the next chapter
Y'know, that party trick sounds adaptable to be a legitimate stasis technique
So his casting is a more perfected one. Good news.
My gods.
...I can already imagine Discord's reaction.
"I could have been turned to GOLD? What a RIP OFF!"
This does not flow well, like at all.
She goes from horrified to seemingly fine in a single sentence. That is not something you simply shrug off.
Now that she knows her friend is willing to kill and with it being in a comparatively peaceful society should definitely have affected how she interacts with him. Not simply blown off and ignoring what he just did.