Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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MC is henceforth under a microscope now from bullies and alicorns.
Wow, Trixie!! Somefilly’s a forward thinker.
Don’t miss the meal date, Sunburst. She might break something far more important than a forehead-horn.
Man, you are on a roll, and I am so here for it.
You're improving greatly with each chapter and aside from the consistent error of writing defiantly instead of definitely, the only one that really stood out was Sunburst going all prison inmate and shanking a foal.
All in all, thank you for the story and I look forward to even more.
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Thanks for pointing that out, I'll get it fixed.
Caught a few typos and grammar mistakes.
Enjoying the story and looking forward to more when you post more.
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Thanks for the assistance. Made corrections.
Thanks for the update!
I need more!!!. I love it!!!!
I'd recommend keeping it 365, just for your own sanity and for simplicity.
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Yeah after thinking about it I decided to just use the same calendar we have for simplicity.
Celestia is totally shipping Twilight with Dawn.
If I remember correctly, they had canonically all stupid names using the princess discord, sun and moon in the name
Sunday was Sunday.Moonday was Saturday. Disday was Friday. I forgot what Wednesday and Thursday lunday was Tuesday Celesteday was Monday I forget which comic it was in
#targeted 😂
Very interesting that sensing auras is not common. Both good and bad....
Also curious is that apparently the bullies are unaware of anti-unicorn defense tactics. Will their attempts to get even make them more formidable?