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Deora na greine

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Thanks so much for adding my story to your read later list! I'm planning on making regular updates starting today to it and many of my stories so I hope to see you around. :raritywink:

well, you already have me interested, I look forward to the development of this story !!!

Thank you for your feedback. The chapters may become longer in the future and I’m working on a shorter part two prologue right now. It’s about the second main character. Eric will have abilities and talents in his own way. They’ll have to use both set of their skills to make it. For Luna has all the power, strength and abilities she could really need besides knowledge and being out of place and Eric will fit that piece nicely, and both will grow overtime.

My main problem is how short the chapter felt, but I attribute it to the fact that it was a prologue, I like how Luna reacted, probably as Luna's partner you should give the human boy some abilities or talents.

Thanks for adding The Wish to your favourites, let me know what you liked and disliked.

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