Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Ty as always, deleting as corrections made.
Can dawn actually hear pinkes thoughts
Like the story, keep up the good work.
Also found this, "It’s alright my family said it’s better to remember him and talk about it than let it fester.” She gave me a bumb." [bump]
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The world will never know.
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If your not going to say I'm going to think dawn can
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So he can but not consciously. It’s like a little whisper in the background.
O little summer child give it a few years and many many death defying adventures and dare devil action as well as a lot of slices of life and ya be singing a different tone.
3 chapter in a day ya spoiling us rotten but I'm glad I just love the story! Celestia and Daybreak interaction are so nice, hope Nightmare Moon and Luna have them too. Give such nice contrast
Dawn interaction with the elemental bearer's is nice and organic, wonder if he get it one whit the whole collection at some point in time.
Finally! Celestia has excepted the inevitable!
3 chapters in a roll!? Dude you're on FIRE!!
Oooh Celestia is getting another personal student huh? This is gonna be INTRESTING. Looking forwards to how Dawn and Celestia interact now.~
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Ty as always, corrected.
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I wasn’t done reading.
Okay I finished now.
Wuh wuh wha~? Is this a new development or did I miss something from before?
I hope this story goes on long enough for Dawn to meet Sunset.
Oh, Applejack. Applejack, Applejack, Applejack.
Hmm wonder what she'll think of Cadence then, unless their marriage be a herd too. Thou i remember it mentioning that RGRE usually accept that royalty is exempt from that rule.
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You might have. Feather has only gotten a few lines.
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So my head cannon is that those with a ‘soulmate song’ like the Cakes or Shining and Cadence are exempt as perfect partners. Not that they couldn’t.
That idea came from a wonderful fic about a human without magic, who couldn’t hear heart songs. So, when a pony sung him a soulmate song she was devastated and the town applauded for ignoring her. until one day he finally heard it after they had dated for a bit.
Dawn is packing the riz so hard, he'll need to beat the fillies off with a stick before they beat him off.
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Do you remember what that fic was called? I would love to read it.
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Sadly no. I might have to write about it now. Oh looks like someone found it.
I'm really hoping that Dawn because officially unofficially a son to Celestia and officially an unofficially Prince.
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This conversation reminded me of a similar fic I read on this site. Could this be the one you read?
Tacet
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Omg yes thank you.
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Glad to hear that was it.
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Hope you enjoy the read.
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Thanks you helpful fluffy nomadic space raptor! Much appreciated.
The innuendoes are strong in this one
:)
The bonding is enjoyable, and I look forward to the reactions when Celestia makes it known she's gonna be taking Dawn as well.
Just look at my profile picture, the middle head always sai-
"MOOOOAAAARRR"
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Now that i think about it Dawn has at least 2-3 mother's (2 if ya consider pear butter an aunt), with Celestia and Luna being another set of aunts and/or mother's.
Does he have any positive male figure in his life?
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Oh celestial is never going to let herself live this down, the sun might sharpen her blade once again
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Take that out of context lol.
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I don't think so, they would have been mentioned already if that were the case, unless it's a teacher or something.
Murphy hears your call.
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Yeah, sounds like a wake up call then.
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Your Welcome. Enjoy.
Thanks for the updates!
Dawn has eyes on him from every direction it seems and Celestia seems not even phased by her Id
So do his grandparents not have any assets that would be automatically transferred to Dawn's family due to their disgrace and arrest?
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You mean an inheritance? From those greedy old men? They would probably make the transfer in their last minutes of life
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Does your experience as a man in your previous life count?
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It's not like he need one considering he have a whole set of memories from his previous life. Just a bit sad there's none. Additionally, it's RGRE, so it would be somewhat bizarre experience for him.
You're really good at preening*
Pinkie is a cat.
The extra-wall-thoughts are intruding!