Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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He’s going to be so tired the next day following all the questions he’s going to get
Nice
D'aww : ) they're cute : )
Looks like the secret could be possibly out
The secret Alicorn thing almost never lasts all that long.
Couldn't you feel the disturbance of Love in the atmosphere? If you couldn't identify relationship frustration, then you haven't mastered your domain yet. (if you want to become a Princess of Shipping in the future.)
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She isn’t at full strength without her empire.
Guard! That’s not a nice thing to call any princess; however, that is the princess of love, buddy. lol
Good job, Cadance, for showing up so quickly. 👍🏻👍🏻
It may take a little adjustment, but I think Twilight will be amenable to this.
Im sorry twilight's wings bit made me lol good chapter
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As always thanks for the new chapter
I'm slightly concerned with the current situation. Dawn being caught with his wings out is a bit of dumb comedy. Will they be able to keep it under wraps long? With the string of reveals recently I'll go with no. This adds a big mess to Dawn's potential herd.
As if Starlight and Twilight weren't already a mess with Dawn and the herd situation.
Then there is Celestia wanting to keep changelings a secret still? Bad idea. You don't have to announce their existence immediately, but you better make plans to intentionally reveal them to the world. Always better to come out planned from authority than someone finding out and bringing evidence to a tabloid. Keeping her species secret will only blow up in their faces.
Well the last few chapter are the definition of "wow this escalated quickly"
So the Guard(at least the few who come to investigate) and twilight now know dawn an Alicorn, which may make hiding the whole thing practically impossible at this point.
Silver lining Celestia and Imago got the bulldozer version of the confession.
Oh boy, NOW Celestia has a lover that could do a LOT for her
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Yeah Luna will be coming back to more family.
How about all three?
It is possible for multiple evolutionary paths to lead to one outcome, like how creatures in real life keep turning into crabs.
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Or it's all 3 in another way.
An alicorn fell near a magic tree, the tree did a thing making a 'monster', then a brave dumb stallion comes along, and BOOM. New race.
Or a stallion was changed by a magic tree(Tree of Harmony?) then met a fallen alicorn monster?
Surprisingly there's no 'Discord did it' theory. Probably unpalatable. Or too likely to form a chaos cult.
Stupid Royal Guard in this one, can they be trusted with state secrets?
A planned rollout of revelation is in order. The other hives will certainly object to breaking the Masquerade Protocol, but which should be publicized first? Conundrum....
I have a hard time believing the guards are gonna keep the secret
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Personally i like the idea that its Chrysalis herself, from a magical tree (maybe not the tree of harmony) that star swirl was working on when he vanished, leaving poor chrysalis to think he abandoned her?
Chrysalis' eventual invasion will be a lot more intetesting with Imago around.
Those two guards are currently the biggest threat to Dawn, so who are they?
I thought Royal changing only lived for 1000 years and regular change had a normal lifespan. I think it was somewhere in the comics I’ll have to look it up.
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Just looked it up. Queen chrysalis was once an ally King Sombra before he was evil and fled the crystal Empire. Once he released the umbra it looks like Royal ones are not immortal, but very long lived as long as they have love to feed on starvation is their most common cause of death, besides being killed by their enemies, or corrupted by other magics that prevent them from feeding properly like dark magic or chaos. also, depending on the type of emotion they feed on how they obtain it, and what race they obtain it from affect the color and certain characteristics they might obtain as shown in the comics. like bumblebee stripes ,stingers, different types of wings. The original creator of the race said it would be possible to have more, but she didn’t know she never made them.
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I’m going with they only live that long because they are either not properly fed, get lust sickness, go mad, or something else but they could be ageless just not truly immortal like alicorns.
Mm, eventful.
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Nah you may end up with multiple species that look similar due to convergent evolution but they wouldn't be able to interbreed.
Then again none of that actually works as you'd expect in fimfiction but there being multiple different sources for multiple species all considered changelings still seems wildly implausible.
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I've read several stories over the years where discord was responsible for creating the changelings typically by cursing a normal city of ponies or as part of an evil genie style contract interpretation.
It's my least liked origin of the changelings scenario as in pretty much every story where this happens discord is "reformed" yet never actually tries to make amends typically no one even asks or acts like he should have any obligations for cursing an entire race.
Sure they've lived their entire lives as changelings so changing them all back at once may not be what they want but no one ever asks either way.
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Ngl i would love to see a story with that as a plot point, where discord keeps trying to get them to turn back into ponies but they don't want to.
Also there are theories that discord can't undo what he's already done, only change things (it would live on in memories tho )
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I could see a story of discord trying to redeem past actions around Equis being interesting especially if none of the effected creatures want to go back after so long.
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I want to believe that Discord didn’t really make them as such into Changelings because if Discord doesn’t have a control in their power as it’s pure chaos, I just thought of turning them into something fun or something different and chaos acted alone and gave that result
So even if I try to "reverse" the transformation years later I could not because they are not the original transformed beings but their descendants and trying to turn them into their "original" versions your chaos will make you end up being a completely random being or by the way not working by being changelings
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Well, a couple things happen when they asked the creator from the interviews. They’re more like bees eventually the queens stop having eggs. And that’s when they get replaced. Because once that happens, they start to age rapidly Even the normal changing live a while until they run out.
If I had to pick I make it so that the more eggs they have it’s like shorting their lifespan using a piece of their life to make new life so like if a regular change can only make maybe 50 eggs and queen can probably make 40,000 or 50,000 this way if he wants to ride into the story of those solo queens or that have very small hives probably live for 2000 years. chrysalis hive wasn’t that big when the changelings lived in the crystal Empire probably under 1000 of them. And since we know by the later seasons, normal changelings usually don’t lay eggs unless the queen allows it probably better to preserve their numbers. And from the comics that show the changelings backstory about four generations have passed since the corruption of king Sombra for them so a normal changling around 250 years is there lifespan without laying eggs. Now most of these numbers of the reproductive cycles are just rough estimates it could be the exact opposite. They’re hard capped at a certain lifespan, and they just layered infinite number of eggs until then, but that would be way too dangerous for a species that really had no limitations. And they would suffer from overpopulation, and that might kill off their food sources.
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We know from the comics that changing that share love, have two different forms, the multicolored form that happens in the episodes, and the good Queen chrysalis where she had butterfly wings and no holes .
I do like the concept of them not having to change completely maybe the multicolors come from them sharing all emotions instead of just a love.
Well that's a hell of a wrench that got thrown into everyone's plans
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Would seem to go against the "reformed" bit as he should be trying to help and if they don't want it that's not helping that's just cursing them again.
Personally i'd really like to see a story where he is actually expected to behave as reformed, be expected to at least try to make amends and not be given some cop out as for why the neigh omnipotent being can't do anything at all to make amends.
Obeying linear time yes I think he could change them back just everyone alive today with the possible exception of chrysalis depending on lore will have lived their entire lives as changelings so it's questionable if they would even want it.
He doesn't need to undo anything he can change things again, barring that even assuming he could for some cop out reason do absolutely nothing to uncurse them he would still have obligation to attempt to make amends in some other way.
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Could be funny and or sad.
If he just snapped his fingers and transformed them all back they would suddenly lose most of the abilities they've had their entire lives and be rid of a few major problems that have plagued them their entire lives.
If we have him just trying to bully people into doing what he wants it doesn't feel like he has learned anything.
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He would still have obligation to attempt to make amends in some other way.
That's got to be my chief complaint about the scenario, everyone knows he's responsible but no one in anyway ever holds him responsible.
No "you should ask if there's anything you can do to make it up to them", no "could you undo it?" instead it's just "well he hasn't done anything catastrophic in the last month, that's probably good enough" and they never even broach the topic of him attempting to make amends as if it's not even a thought.
Cat is out of the bag, in more ways than one.
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I just realized, the magic nullifying throne would prevent discord from making changelings ponies again, so he would have to offer when they were all reformed, and they would have all accepted themselves so that would mean almost nobody would take him up on his offer.
...Ops. Not how I expected her to find out.