Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
Page generated in 0.032 seconds
Total duration
567 users online
897,567 hits today, 2,924,228 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I just started reading the new chapter.
It was mentioned previously that pegasi feel clouds differently from ponies under effect of cloudwalking.
Rainbow Dash, element of loyalty.
I wonder if any of the Nobles would try to get rid of Twilight believe in that a common unicorn should not be student of Celestia but a noble unicorn should be her personal student
Evidences are piling up, but not enough so as to justify major investigations. Maybe there’s an agency she’ll pass this along to, but it does involve her school.
Rainbow didn’t want to show her stunt? Must still be in development. Not ready for show.
I can see why unicorns might think it’s a disease or something; if that leyline is untrained, it could get tired and require rest unannounced. But if he trains it up, I can’t imagine why it would disadvantage Dawn at all especially if he trains while he sleeps on some clouds… maybe he could place some under his hooves like shoes and walk / bounce / skate around… wear some condensed, hardened cloud like armor or clothes? Give himself some cloud glasses or a Starswirl beard. Lol 8-year old with a cloud beard, cloud cloak, and cloud shoes. So many fun things.
11697189
I always considered Twilight as from a lesser noble house considering her brother was able to marry Cadence.
Thanks for the update!
11697206
The problem is that his magic is flowing to wings that don't exist, rather than his horn, which means his leylines are incomplete. In fact, it would probably be less of an issue if he had Earth Pony leylines, because at least then the magic is flowing to places that make sense.
Of course, we don't know exactly how concerning it really is; for all we know it could be no worse than having mirrored organs is for humans (i.e. mostly a concern for surgeons).
11697567
So I will explain later why Dawn is ok but I’m debating when to introduce that information
11697576
Don't feel pressured. Half the fun for a reader is coming up with theories about what's happening. It is a good sign of reader engagement, honestly.
So yeah, go at your own pace, s'all good. Things get revealed when the narrative demands it and not a chapter earlier
11700147
Yeah I know didn't realise Shining was there at first.
It would be worrying if he was a normal pony. But he's not a normal pony, is he?
Oooooohhhh ...... I guess he's already a alicorn ?
I KNEW IT