Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Starlight and twilight are going to be frienemies for a long time it seems.
Faust damnit starlight, you just shot Dawn's work down the drain with twilight....
So little dawn already doing enchantment is he? How 'good' are they?
What is the technological level of Equestria in this one? Would be interesting if dawn get to travel to the human world of EQG and try to learn as much of electromechanics and such to implement them in Equestria.
Also a new changling princess? Didn't know Imagou had a rump with a stallion, considering her ficsation on Celestia. Also what is a den mother? Do you mean a nurse of primary caretaker of eggs?
11821980
Yes, den mother’s are the primary caretakers of young changelings. They are bot early teachers, food distributors, etc. No imago didn’t have a romp with a stallions, she was born due to an abundance of love.
11821976
Well TBF she was the bearer of the elements with her sister before the mane six, I wouldn't be surprised if she can still feel a connection to them and conciquently the new bearer's.
And they able to free or purify Luna because the elements are fully connected unlike Celly brute force them to deal with her sister (half the elements technically still belong to luna).
As for Dawn existence disrupting the elements depends, at worst he'll replace twilight as the element of magic at best not effecting anything or becoming a 7 elements.
Ditto for one of the drones
For the princess... Alicia? I was thinking in Alice Through the Looking Glass.
Loving the puberty plot (arc?) It has a lot of possibilities.
11821985
Well the den mother once mature enough definitely will help Imago.
I'm not sure about another changling princess... This seem a little too soon, thou that would explain the implied amount of them.
I sincerely hope Chrysalis will be more tactful and strategic in her planning with the amount of queens running around.
11821990
ditto would be perfect for the drone. Love Alicia as a name.
Cerebrum can the den mother name. With the whole canon changling names being body parts name.
11821995
So Imago isn’t that young, about four hundred years old. She just hasn’t had a good Chance to safely start her own hive until now. Her birthing a princess under ideal conditions isn’t unusual with so much available love.
Trixin Starlight pretty much just marked their territory comes the Dawn. Normal drones name all I can think of is (Gladius) it is name of the Roman sword.
Damn, Project Twilight encountered an unexpected setback. Damn you Godly Pony Engineers!
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Yeah most stallions go camping or stick to ‘stallion only’ areas and establishments in their local city during the season if they don’t want to participate that year. Colts typically don’t have to worry about staying home, as fillies don’t want to mess with protective mothers or the colt will travel with their sire.
Starlight and Trixie don’t seem to know about the Ponyville crew. They’re going to need to have a conference or something. Elsewise I see a bit of a conflict potential… though, I think Dawn will clear it up eventually.
I know you can’t hear me, Dawn, but pay attention to Twilight. She’s shutting down again. There should be signs. And listen to your inner Pinkie, Twilight!!
Older mares or colt-cuddler? Also: wha~? How did they even figure that out? Was Starlight showing signs of liking Dawn that way before? Trixie definitely was… or did Starlight recently learn whatever it is about Sunburst?
OOOF. No twiggles, you were doing so well!
so cute.
11821987
Huh that raises an interesting question, what if visions by their very nature are incapable of showing where YOU would be, and there are actualy 7 elements instead of 6.
Two chapters in a single day was a surprise, I do hope dawn doesn’t let twilight retreat back like she is doing, I liked the fact that she was more social compared to canon twi at this age for It’ll certainly affect the start of cannon I’m sure.
Anyways great chapters and eager for more, tell then my good author!
great chapter
11822249
I know a thing or two about image editing
Describe his cutie mark in detail and I'd be more that happy to make some adjustments, until it looks identical to canon for the story
(For free of course)
This has better not turn into one of those fics where all the conflicts begin and end almost the exact same as the show. Railroading plot is really boring to read. Don't be afraid to shake things up and completely change things.
'Digit' for one of the Drones. IYKYK.
I must admit, this story has grown on me. Wasn't too sure of it to start with.
Can definitely see the inspiration from "Life Finds a Way", but glad to see it's also doing its own thing too!
Not really worried about Twilight to much. I doubt Dawn will let her shut herself in completely. It's sorta hard to do that when you literally have the same private teacher. I forsee it being a little rocky for a bit before he gets fed up and gets to the root of the problem.
He might be in a reverse gender society but we all know his origin. That's not just something you undo in a few year's
11822263
...Dawn was kidnapped for what 6 chapters? That's not really a railroad thing. If anything this would be a wedge between friends. It happens
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ehh, don't know what your arguing there mate. The OG poster just didn't want to see copy and paste of the show it sounds like, which I am inclined to agree with since at this point we have diverged from canon motivations and events it would be odd things to be the exact same.
11822263
i wouldn't worry about it the author has been doing a great job. still i feel like you could have worded your thoughts more positively
I actualy enjoy this story more than 'Life finds a way' due to waaaay less bloat and new character spam.
Couldn’t help but think of this.
Well that was fast.
For over thinking most things Twilight stopped thinking shockingly quickly. 🤔
Oh no.
Oh no, kid be mackin', and he doesn't even realize it. I fear this bodes ill.