Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Yeah it’s mainly this. Stallions have no issue with non virgin mares considering mares often get it on while in trial herds the main issue is connecting with foals that they didn’t sire. And yea why join a well established herd that has foals from a previous lead stallion when there are plenty of mares to start a fresh herd with and not feel pressured by previous foals or expectations. Now sometimes a stallion will join such a herd but only if they have lost their own herds and have a foal of their own, similar to Firelight and Starlight.
Good chapter!
Well that was nice. Nice indeed
Interesting chapter
I will wait for more to come
So when are you going to jump to the Future
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Never. While I do jump a few weeks at a time I still have plenty of setup before NMM shows up.
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I like that image in the author note
Always enjoyed the idea that 'Shy is part thestral and can switch between forms at will.
Now Dawn just needs to serve a heaping helping of ripe mango and mango related treats at the trial herd merger to introduce Flutterbat to the rest of the herd.
once
I dunno about this sentence, is Dawn just calling her "Bat"? or did you miss a word, like "The bat"? In any case it just reads awkward.
I
just missing some capitilization.
So Flutterbat/shy are one in the same. Makes sense. Kinda neat that's it's all willful transformations and that even Dawn has one.
Not a lot else to comment on here, looking forward to more.
Firstly love the art. Tree of Harmony needs more love and attention.
Secondly I love the idea of shy and bat being same person but two personas. Switching is interesting and I hope it becomes more common
# Does this mean anyone with enough thestal blood can switch forms? Or just pegasus?
So dawn has his own Alternative 'Evil form', glad he actually embrace it. A rare thing.
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Yes he is just calling her two halves ‘Bat’ and ‘Shy’ for short. Keep in mind they are technically speaking another language so it doesn’t sound as bad when he says it in Equish VS English. Also thanks I’ll make this correction ps: when I can.
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Shy is the only one to switch like this. My cannon is that it’s caused by her dense magic from being the element of Kindness on top of her Thestral Heritage. Pinkie has her Pinkieness, Rainbow can do Rainbooms, AJ will be getting a surprise, and Rarity has more powerful gem magic. Twilight needs no explanation.
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Nice
Does that mean if someone has dance enough magic they can do the same thing? Or if chaos magic involved? Is it limited to thestal or kirin can be the same?
THAT IS ADORABLE
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So other ponies could have the ability with training their magic or they might get other ones. Dawn’s mom Forest can shoot lightning without gathering it, which was shown, she also has a better green hoof than most pegasi. His Dam, Morning Dew, can also pull off the weaker versioned gold spell, but that’s secret from everypony. Along with having stronger inate magic.
Only thing that is starting to bother me is fourth wall breaking god of chaos Pinkie Pie. Her butting in felt immensely inappropriate. Still enjoying the story outside of the pink text.
Wonder if the tree is sapient yet, or if it's only sentient still.
Carrying two minds in one body can be challenging, luckily it really seems to just be one with two personality modes. Not looking forward to the future identity crisis though.
Is Dawn going to tell his friends about his wings before it’s officially announced?
Does Fluttershy know about any other thestrals?
Magic Mango Forest.
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Yeah I was debating on that. I’ll probably fade it out now since Dawn is coming more into his own so I don’t need the character commentary as much.
This was cute. Also loved the whole "thank goodness i used a cleaning spell" part.
Hmmm for flutter bat, is she and fluttershy gonna just end up fusing over time? Or stay seprate. because i kinda like the idea of just a thestral in ponyvile.
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Yes.
Sadly no.
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Fully sapient just dormant, till recently.
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I was more talking about unicorn becoming kirin via training their draconic heritage or non-pony turning into a thestal.
But that interesting.
And Pinky is like always her adorable Eldritch self.
Damn, my headcanon from now on is that Pinkie is Eldritch Outer God on vacation in Equestria.
On another note, I wonder if Nobles will be up in arms when they get to know stallion is getting to be a Legitimate Prince
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There is a great fic about her being the failed ‘fifth horse’ of the apocalypse. I don’t remember the name though.
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My headcanon is that it was always sapient, but its mind was too foreign. It had to learn how ponies experience the world before it could manifest in a way they could comprehend.
To be honest I would like to see more of Harmony in the future even if as a voice at the back of the head like pinkie. Maybe put Harmony there instead of pinkie? Or some dream/vision thing where they could sit and talk or something?
As Dawn gets his reveal soon, what he is exactly Alicorns of? Balance? Something was mentioned about magic and machinery at the beginning but no mention about machines since then and twilight gets magic.
Maybe Order?
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Sorry that’s one thing I won’t spoil.
Got sudden epiphany. If Song of Storms had effect it did I wonder how other elemental songs from Zelda would work. Well, at least those that are not few seconds long heh.
Or for that matter other songs besides Zelda ones
Way to go Dawn
So Fluttershy has a dual personality in the most literal way possible.
The first voice whisper's gently, but the other shouts HARDER!
I didn't realize Pinkie Pie was such a nerd. I thought she knew how to party.
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Where Pinkie was one of Death?
I think it's one where Twi became a goddess avatar. It's one in my list
So Flutters has a Jekyl and Hyde situation.