Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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A nice little gathering. Wholesome and cute
So the nymph's(baby changling) need to be connected manually by the queen. Does that mean if a queen can add other drones to her hive or disconnect them if they a problem? Ya know Thorax x Imago x Celestia sounds interesting.
I'm wondering how does abjuration or anti-magic work in your verse?
I totally forgot the whole bat Pony what Nightmare Moon wanted him to do. Why Can't We Dawn shows or accidentally shows that he's an alicorn then I wonder if a lot of ponies would think that Dawn is Celestial son if they think that it would keep all the pressure off from the Nobles and others countries leaders away from Dawn family.
I don't think Starlight is gonna be very accepting of Twilight
Nice
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It’s a bit early for an accidental reveal but his family and the important ponies already know, like Pinkie. Darn right.
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I know that but I mean when the rest of the country and other countries found out that he's a male alicorn he probably wouldn't like all that pressure on his family and Nobles constantly asking and threatening about marriage proposals also from the country's leaders about the same thing so when he reveals or accidentally reveals wouldn't it be easier for family they allowed Dawn be Celestia's son in the public eye.
Help i think i got turned into a thestral because i can't stop going SQEEEEEEEEEEEE
Can't wait for the next chapter hopefully they'll grow up
Embarrassed but straight to the point… So cute!
AJ’s aware of Rarity’s intentions, right? Is she not going to say anything before going home? Or does she need the herd’s approval to speak for them? …They knew she was going to visit Dawn, right?
Where was Starlight and Trixie for the holiday? Did Granny Smith stay home with Big Mac?
Luna’s definitely going to have questions for Dawn when she gets more time. She’s also adorable here.
…Also quite forward. Getting one up on your sister before parole is even up for hearing. wtg princess.
read this one and the last one both great
Might remove the “had”
Funky sentence
I half expect Dawn to follow her.
He seems to be a bit too suspicious to leave her simply be now.
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More curious about the discrepancy than suspicious. He understands that the show wasn’t 100% accurate though, especially with him in the mix.
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Hi Pinkie!
Anyone else hoping Feather manages to pull off being what Celestia needs?
Nightmare withdrawing due to the celebration?
Yknow I don't think I've read a long fiction with pinkie as the love interest,weird.
T-9 years