Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Fluttershy isn't a year older than Pinkie Pie? That's interesting.
Huh? Collecting emotions?
Run away to Ponyville? Who? What?
You said it. You had to say it. You’ve doomed everypony, Celestia. What have you done?
Interesting usually it Applejack and Fluttershy who are the oldest but I suppose this makes sense if Rarity is moving now to ponyvill.
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I always felt with how she acted Rarity was the oldest but meh it's an alt universe.
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Foreshadowing.
Fluttershy's age in relation to Pinkie's was brought up in the show. In the original canon, Fluttershy is one year older than Pinkie. This is a minor detail when the story is already AU.
changeling
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That is a good one, haven’t seen any new chapters from it for a while.
Thanks for the update!
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Yea it was just confusing the hell outta me like I was missing context to something that was obvious but then again I really don't know much about horses other than the very surface level knowledge gained from less family friendly stuff, honestly the first time I've heard said term.. no beef of course I don't mean it in a negative way I just wanted to say how it was tripping me out
If this story is inspired by life fiinds way is cure wave in it as a prince????
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I honestly thought about it but the butterflies would be huge and since he hasn’t gotten his story to the same point in time I can’t easily work it in. Unless I wrote it as a divergent timeline where cure went missing for a while or something.
Minuets misspelled
*Minutes
I'm liking this story.
Short chapter's but good.
Is Feather Duster a changing????
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That could also be but she not going crazy studying so far.
11705988 oh shi- I actually forgot about those two
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I thought my comment was going to be taken as a joke or something irrelevant, I didn't think they were going to respond criticizing me, funny
PD: How do I put the name of the person I'm commenting on instead of numbers?
I think someone is going to try to abduct Dawn soon.
I hope Dawn kicks their asses.
This is good story,
Not many story like this...
Why this one only get 100+ like? that confuse me..
looking forward to the next update...
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...Yes? We already know they are a thing. Rather if they are actually important anytime soon is the question
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They where talking about 2...who's the second 9ne running away?
Fluttershy:10
AJ:10
Pinkie:11
Wait, I thought Fluttershy was a year older than Pinkie?
I'm kidding, it's not that important.
Loving this tbh
Oh this had some interesting nuggets of information.
Just gonna point this out. Obviously, it doesn't have to stick to the OG canon, but Flutters is older than Pinkie in the show.
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Yeah I changed up some of the births to take the ripple and that it’s an RGRE into account. For example Fluttershy will have an older sister as well now and her older brother isn’t seen as a washout since Stallions are pampered more.
I'm wondering which version of Feather you have gone with. awesome story so far though
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I for one am greatly enjoying the ripple.
Looks like shenanigans are brewing!
Wait, no, stop, you can't just drop that tidbit! If they have infiltrators that deep then how the heck could they have fallen so hard in a decade to be driven to the point of invasion? Or is this much simpler?
Interesting age changes. I haven't read up on the mlp gen 4 lore in a hot minute but canonically all the main 6 are within 3 years of each other so pretty dramatically changed. Can't wait to see what you do with this.