Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Nice
How was this storyline changed?
Why is this chapter so short?
I wonder if a fight will break out between the Ponyville herd and the Canterlot herd
Huh, didn't expect Rarity to go right after Fluttershy. Seems to work. I'm so happy that Imago and Celestia are giving things a chance. That's sweet. The biggest issue will be Starlight accepting others into the trial herd. It's going to be positively massive at this rate.
I love these Slice of Life character development chapters
Not a bad chapter but rarity and Fluttershy might be a little upset 💔 the one that want is taken unless they joined lead mare starlight and Trixie I can see twilight joining in many as well ❤️🩹
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So,
Rarity, starlight, and
nightmare moonluna gonna fight for to be dawn lead mare?11828042
So I only gave credit where credit was due. I was inspired to write my story after reading that one and it’s the only reason I mentioned it.
As for his memories I have downplayed them for a few reasons. 1st He is 8: Life finds a way has his new memories just take over and he no longer acts like the foal he could have been, Dawn has decided to just enjoy foal hood and somewhat suppress those memories until he grows up again / he needs them. 2nd His Encounter with NMM and his terrible family members has somewhat messed with his head about Equestria being a land of nothing but sunshine and rainbows. 3rd with only 10 ish years until NMM shows up instead of the roughly 90 of Cure Wave, Dawn is way more conscious about changing the OG timelines big events.
So that's starlight, Trixie, Twilight and lyra of canterlot and now rarity, Fluttershy, pinkie and possibly rainbow that is after dawn boy this is gonna be a long ride ain't it ?
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Yep this won’t be a short story overall.
Very nice, always enjoy when this story updates!
Dawn is gonna have one hell of a time wrangling all the mares hes gonna end up with.
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You forget Aj, she’s very northern but after all they’re not blood brothers
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This is why im thinking starlight over reacts and breaks up for a bit.
Man he gonna need to start putting that Cutie Mark to use!
Damn rarity plotting rn is devious. Our man dawn gonna have a whole Lotta headache when he gets home.
...how many fillies does one colt need!?
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The answer is Yes