Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Wow, things are getting spicy. Foalnapping, Nightmare Moon talking to Dawn, Lyra breaking down and possibly being purchased? Oh man. These next couple chapters are going to be nuts. Dawn's parents are going to raise hell.
Caught two error/typos.
Seems like some ponies are going to find themselves on Celestia's bad side very soon.
This is getting exciting. I guess that Dawn talking to Nightmare moon/Luna is due to his cutie mark and if it is. I wonder what is his effect on Celestia is.
His not dear old grampa will have a lot to answer for in the future.
Am I the only one thinking "surprise arranged marriage"?
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Ty as always
Oooooo celestia is FUCKING PISSED, lets go im ready.
Very exciting developments!! Even if MC makes a deal with the antagonists, they still got evidence of an agent being attacked and two foals foalnapping. Whenever those two show up, there’s going to be issues with the authorities.
Definitely hope the villains have to work at being evil. Keep your head on straight, Dawn.
I wonder if Dawn will try to replicate this dream-success later. I suppose that magical dampening affects various types of leylines other than unicorn? Maybe he can get a blanket with the same enchantment as the bag… though this might be tricky to acquire… NMM doesn’t seem too evil as long as he’s giving her some much missed social interaction.
Dew was right. New parents are going to freak out when they find out.
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Yeah I never considered NMM evil exactly just a bit unhinged with her sister around. She did make a functional empire in a few timelines during that whole time traveling debacle.
Thanks for the update!
NMM helping the Mc as well as Celestia reminding some idiots exactly who and more importantly what she is occurring all at once? I almost feel pity(not really) for the kidnappers and their benefactors.
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Things are heating up
Thanks Wisper for a fantastic chapter. I just stumbled upon your story today and really love it. It's always pleasent to find a well written human-pony rencarnation slice of life story on this site, and I'm excited to see where you take this story in the future. I wish you the best of luck writing your next chapter, and as always have fun writing.
>purchase
Slavers don't deserve to live. RIP AND TEAR!
Damn am I ready to see some bad guys get destroyed.
You'll have to forgive the lack of comments, I've simply been binging the story in my spare time. I'm absolutely loving it so far.
I really hope the MC realizes the cannon has gone and left the station.
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Thanks for the edit work again. Might be better to send them as a DM if you can though it’s kind of a lot for a comment.
I need more chapters man! I know you can do it! I believe in you!
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Don’t worry more will be coming
Have Sunbutt and Nightmare Monnie support your kidnapping? It’ll be painful and scary, but I feel it’ll be worth it if I see them kicking their asses to the malaise... it’ll be absolutely fun
Neat.
Meat?
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Yup, I saw that MEAT myself as well as Monnie. I'm pretty sure moonbutt takes extra offense when you can't even nickname them Moonie correctly.
Well he is Balanced, after all.
Oh somepony just bucked up big time thou knowest not the wrath of a sun until it casts judgment upon thine heads repent wicked sinners for thine day of reckoning is nigh