Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Oh Dawn how could you sell her out like that? A Gentleman keeps his secrets.
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It’s rough having Honesty as a sister.
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He didn't have much choice considering aj was determined to get the truth and wouldn't let it drop. Doesn't she think if her brother had sex against his will he say something. And she keeps trying to protect him she will only drive a wedge between them.
Noticed these two on my second read through:
Oh boy. Rarity found out. She’s really going to get her dream of a bonifide prince!
How long before school resumes? Will the announcement be before or after the term begins?
Will being the sister of a prince change Diamond Tiara’s dynamic with the CMCs?
What will the Mad Queen do when she gets this bit of news?
Fashion
I swear that word looks less like a word every time I see it.
Well that secret rendezvous became un-secret mighty quick. I really wish AJ wouldn't get up in others business all the time, she should learn to take vagueness or a no as an answer. Honesty doesn't or shouldn't demand all secrets be revealed after all. And others should understand they can be honest without being forthright.
Anyway, nice awkward little chapter, and I look forward to the next one.
Nice.
Now that that's out of the way I remember herding instincts. I think I stopped reading it cause they added another stallion
Edited cause spelling
A very good chapter; may take a look at that story you recommended.
Wonder what queen chrysalis reaction going to be when she hears is a male alicorn
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Who knows.
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Hearing instincts?
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Don't do this to me autocorrect is a villain
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It is the worst while typing ponyisms.
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Those damn ponies and thier ponanese
Is Mac still a virgin?
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Nope. He and Cheerilee are officially together after the Galla, they had a good night.
Good chapter
So when is Twilight going to meet the rest of the herd?
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right now hooray!
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True dat
Well at least he held back a friendship-damaging fury-fueled confrontation. Colt is learning sideways but it's still learning!
Great, now Pinkie is probably scheduling a "Fluttershy comes out" party and nopony will know what that really means.... 🙃😂
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It's practically a non-word. It's an old-timey word for confession, acknowledgement, it wasn't in use for 100+ years
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It's a good story, though way too Clop heavy for my taste.
The author of that one also does The Desert Prince and Dust In The Wind.
If you've read Five Score Divided by Four, Dust on the Wind is an Amazing addition to that universe.
The Desert Prince is also a great story, although updates are few and far between.
Tells her everything, but without a song
Herding Instincts was good until another male was added to the herd. It was just not my thing, was very uncomfortable about it.
But anyway, great chapter :)