Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Never knew the apples where nobles
Ayyy
More study time with Mamalestia and my favorite adorkable book-pone in the future?
Sounds like a jolly good time to me.
So I take it Sunset had a tendency to speak with her mouth full.
Welp, the reply letter from his family will definitely be a somber one.
But I take it he'll be meeting the Apple clan soon enough.
Thank you for the chapter.
She slipped up and almost said Sunset? Really hope Dawn's presence changes that somewhat, I love me some Celestia and Sunset feels.
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In some fics they are considered a noble house. Them being one of the founders of Ponyville and since their family is spread all over the country is what earned them the title, so for this universe I went with that lore.
Here is the twilight. There are two errors here. Wrong here and Twilight's name needs a capital. A few instances of Spike's name with the same problem. Ctrl+F to locate them if you go back to fix it.
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Thanks, should have gotten them all now.
I didn’t expect Twilight to join the meal; but once Spike was mentioned, I thought, “Is he going to continue the daddy joke?” But Spike might be too young yet to realize and join the trolling. That sparkle in Celestia’s eyes though.
I wonder if Dawn caught that Celestia almost called him Sunset. Not sure if he knows about that part of the show or if the mirror will be apart of this story canon.
Wasn’t too much punishment going on. I realize Celestia’s probably making use of the excuse to get MC around Twilight so she can get friend exposure (among other possible reasons) but if Dawn left to get a teacher, Sunburst could have gotten hurt in the meantime and they would have likely all denied wrongdoing. How was helping wrong, Princess? Older / Princess Twilight would do that.
Next time? Next time!!
Oh, poor Pear Butter.
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Capitalisations have been fixed from what I can see. 'Here' is still the wrong type as 'hear' is used for listening (same paragraph I quoted as before).
I also just finished reading the chapter (at just before midnight when I have school tomorrow) and found it quite interesting. Good night.
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yeah spike is to young to join in on the trolling but yeah Dawn caught the name mix-up[ and he knows the show but its not 100% accurate as he is finding out considering he is alive /spoiler]
I wonder it has to do with Dawn parents that the letter she read
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What about not just dawn???
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His whole family is the deviation from canon. They saved one of Applejack's parents when both died in the show. The pegasus also has powerful and unusual magic. I don't know if pegasi have ever been shown to summon lightning without using clouds in the show; if Dawn has pegasus leylines, can the rest of her family also have the unusual hybrid magic? (pegasi with unicorn or earth leylines who can use weather magic more directly than usual.
Those are my elaborated thoughts on it, but it is still speculation.
I really enjoy reading your story so far!
I hope he says no to the personal student offer though, it's not like she's going to teach an eight year old some ancient combat magic or something not already available to the public, and it would take away his free time with his friends.
Question to the author: is his cutie mark partially for the mechanics of magic?
Celestia is absolutely playing the matchmaker long game.
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Always keep in mind you never know the end goal of an author until they actually tell you. So don't give your hopes up in they only stay friends.
But hell look on the bright side...he would make a great sire for her!
So very glad to see best girl actually confirmed for this story. Little sad it's apparently too late to protect her though.
Please don't pair Twilight Sparkle with Dawn. That's only going to slow him down since she is so dense to ques.
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if it does happen it won’t be till much later.
Stupid unicorn supremacists. The Apple clan is still important!