Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Woah! Storm King!?
Tempest was already with the Storm King this early? I didn't see the movie.
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Meh timeline in this AU is a bit off but I figured she’s older than Twilight and broke her horn at an early age then they had plenty to conquer before Equestria so her joining his army as a lowly slave now and working her way up makes sense.
Ooh... MG Celestia
As always thanks for the update
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Well she left home as a child and then we time skipped over the rest of her backstory to the present so she certainly could have ended up with him as a child.
Shame Tempest was missed.
Nice
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Yeti or not, here he comes.
I guess the Storm King will be turning people to gold instead of stone now.
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Doesn't the spell take a while to work?
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It does but he could still make use of it I guess if they show it to him…
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Probably gonna die before they can tell him. Atenas are not nice places.
So we'll be seeing the Storm King at some point. But, that seems far from the current point of the story.
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Just a teaser.
Colosseum? I feel like I stopped reading one story for another.
Wait a minute my brain just caught up. That's Dawn's exscaped family! The 2 that can turn thing's into gold. There either going to die or the Storm king found money laundering
Love the story Author there's a few nick picks that kind of made the story just a tad sad. Even if this story is a rgr it's sort of a lightweight on the balance scale. Maybe it's intentional. A slow build up and becomes heavy later on. Love the reaction of sum of the characters but seems rush..I think. Like you trying to reach the chapters that you really want to work on. Lastly there's quite a few characters lol not a bad thing but I bet it's a lil stressful to know which characters to have certain personalities that might make you want to end the story on a good note. 7 out of 10. Please make more chapters, I'm running out of things to read
then the film is canon in this AU, since the King Storm is the only canonical King apart from the King Sombra
Oh, they're still alive. How exciting.
Oh hello Storm King.
Ain’t no way
Danm! And to think I was excited to read a chapter on : "Plesures of the flesh - Book 1 - how to best spit roast your pony, both for your sexual urges and your delicate culinary palette".
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Those griffins would have surely made more gold by selling them to a 1st grade noble's private cook in Griffonia. What a waste of potential for the world of gastronomy. 🤫☠️