Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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He's going to have a lot of influence here
I bet 1 bit that meets RD
I bet 5 bits that "grandparents" indirectly ruin everything
AJ and Mac will be a little different than canon now that they still have one parent. I wonder how that’ll manifest. They both become workaholics before. Maybe they’ll be a little more sociable? Or maybe just more willing to take breaks and enjoy a moment?
Forest is right. AJ’s a pretty good choice. I don’t think Dawn’s thinking about those things much yet or future professions, but Trixie and possibly a couple others at school may have some input about it.
We’ll get to see the Pinkie glazing in her natural environment.
Think Celestia will be bothered by Dawn making friends with the future Bearers before Twilight? Or maybe she’ll be like, “welp, I guess I got a spare now. Just in case. Amirite?”
The birth reveal is big, I think. Could have some far reaching impact if someone studied it and figured out how to replicate it.
Acres, not Acers, it was spelled correctly in the chapter name.
Horses have manes, not mains.
My auto correct tells me young'n doesn't have an i in it.
I haven't finished reading the chapter yet.Interesting chapter, the plot advances.
I wonder if Princess Celestia is going to start second guessing Twilight or herself as she sees Dawn meet each of the future elements. Rarity is the only element Dawn hasn't interacted with yet and Celestia has been shown to have noticed that fact. I think in the comics (that I haven't read), that the Princess initially believed Sunset Shimmer to be the one, up until Sunset got mad and ran off. There's a somewhat decent chance that she might mistake Dawn for element of magic further down the line. He got his CM from the rainboom, has unusual magic, has met most of the other elements and is good at making friends. The most interesting thing I took away from this chapter is that he appears to have been created from a spell without a sire, and that might have something to do with his strange magic.
Thanks for the update!
Caught a few typos and grammar errors.
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Thank you as always Star for the edits. Should be looking cleaner.
Cute, I wonder if they will have an weird adventure in or near the Everfree Forest. I take it whatever his parents did to that fertility spell it didn't involved a stud, so that could be what got his soul caught and reincarnated in Equestria, now is just to wonder what reawaken his latten previous incarnation?
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You are correct, that spell which shouldn’t lead to birth was the first butterfly. It was the Rainboom from the first chapter that ‘woke’ him.
Pfff!
Trotson! It’s option three, legality unknown! Get me ‘Gavel Banger’s Bench Reference Grimoire Of Outlawed and Restricted Thaumaturgy,’ can’t be too careful with these things!
“Best pegasus she knows” my flank. The ego on that mare… is perfectly normal for a pegasus.
The futa spell (or gender swap) is apparently a thing here wonderful. Explains his strong magic.
I guess his dam already had the 'best' pegasus she could find. I mean the chick can shoot lightning out of her wings! And Dews parents despise her? I know it's likely a racist thing but that's strong magic!
XX+XX=XY
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I wonder whether or not this is intentional...
She's actually Mrs Cake in the show, right?
Cup Cake(formerly Chiffon Swirl) changed her name after marriage.
But this is an RGRE universe.
So should Carrot Cake have changed his name instead?
I guess it still kind of make sense for mares to change their names, given the fact that herds usually have one stallion.
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It was accidental thanks for all the edits btw. I’ll get around to fixing them on an edit day. Doing editing kinda kills my muse for a bit so I don’t do it often unless something is really bad that breaks the story like missing the name here.
Oh and to answer your name question, names don’t normally change unless they want to change them. The future Mrs. Cake takes her husband’s name because they will share a heart song indicating them as soulmates so won’t form a herd.
They shouldn't have blamed him for not knowing a thing they should have told him.
It's funny though how he's already getting shipping labels prepared all over the place.
When Mommy and mommy love each other very much mommy grew a **** and snuggled with mommy
Pony snuggles are best snuggles
HUH. I didn't see that coming but it makes a lot of sense.
She's gonna marehandle this colt a lot, huh?
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