Balanced Dawn an 'average' colt from Sires Hollow, one that wasn’t ever supposed to exist. At least according to his new memories.
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Hmm well if only one was an original relative of her parents they could just not be herding together yet and both living in other parts of the country unable to take care of her. Or perhaps her ‘aunts’ were actually other future herd members that managed the home front. is an interesting idea.
Very surprised to see this happening to Dawn.
Poor colt. Has no luck at all.
At least he's prepared.
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The Apple family’s fresh cider has no alcohol. The cider would need to ferment for it to have any and that can only be sold at market with a permit or in bars.
pretty sure the word here is flair as a flare is often associated with light
going
I have no idea what you were trying to say here. "flew through the open section of the earthen wall?" is my best guess
plus
Dawn looks edgy and cute in that picture at the bottom there. I like it
Poor Dawn just can't catch a break. Kidnapped twice in two years, must be some kind of record.I like seeing Daybreaker make her appearances, albeit briefly. I also love how she reacts to Dawn in general. May the Heavens help whoever gets on Daybreakers bad side.
Also Dawn should have somehow left a griffon alive, if only to share the tale of how overwhelmingly powerful he is so new kidnappers would think twice or send even more forces to try. Bigger conflicts are fun, what can I say?
Looking forward to yet more of this, you're spoiling us heavily.
With Daybreaker that pissed, if she ever learns it was Griffons, then Griffonia 'boutta smell like a dang KFC!
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Ty as always. And yeah Dawn actually planed on keeping them alive but didn’t take the wild life into account.
Wait, this isn't in the direction of the thestrals, right? That would be a coincidence!
After all, it's not like he's forgotten how deal with Nightmare Moon. 😇
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Now when he gets back he can do the “if I had a bit for every time I’ve been foalnapped I’d have two bits which isn’t a lot but it’s weird it’s happened twice.” line.
Huh, it's on its way to becoming a yearly tradition at this rate.
Dawn: *Foalnapped*
Also Dawn:
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Damn, handsome son of a b-
Channeling
Can't wait to see where Dawn ended up.
I wonder what spikes reactions going to be when it sees his dad is gone
That fills out my bingo darn
I had been wondering why we were getting so many chapters at once. I’m not complaining mind you, just surprised. But now I understand. You were accelerating to get to this next plot arc weren’t you?
Got to say I love this chapter!
Guard training payed off. Thou luckily for dawn the griffs forgot about earth pony magic when dealing with Alicorn.
So now Dawn stranded in a monster infested forest like everfree but Faust knows where.... what won't he give to meet a friendly neighborhood Witcher
Luna quest seem to had enough of Dawn procrastinating with it so fate(or harmony) decided time to get moving via kidnapping express. The old curse of being a MC of Story.
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Ye I doubt it unless she wants the whole world to condemned her as tyrant and if they have their own WMD like that one fic Equestria is doomed. Or if other rule's are some kind of demi-gods themselves. But I doubt griffonia be surviving.
Less nice but still nice.
Colt makes a badass looking thestral
later
throw
Either feels forced or him really not thinking clearly (he was just kidnapped again but at the same time he did call them lunch so it was foreshadowed.)
He had a group of knocked out gryphons and one with some major amount of injuries.
He put an I feel unjustified amount of trust in his stun spell keeping them down especially after the first shot didn't take them all down and yet he just wonders off for hours as if there was no risk of them waking up and leaving.
He also left one that was incapacitated from his injuries (which would have been way more variable In recovery) who would have had decent chances both of recovering well enough to get away or dying from his untended injuries.
Query: He went from being unable to use magic and flight to just being able to. How?
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If I understand you correctly… he originally had a horn ring and his wing were tied up but once he knocked out the two inside he blended into the shadows for a moment and they just slipped off. He could still use hoof magic. So the griffs just underestimated him.
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This somewhat matches Life Finds a Way. It's likely a well-guarded secret that you can't contain Alicorn like that. Thankfully he accidently maintained the Mascarade
If that hen just snuggled him, he might have kept sleeping methinks